翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アーティスト名は「Cheeky Parade」に統一下さい。全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。

日本語

18:00～
関根 優那・島崎 莉乃・鈴木 友梨耶・鈴木 真梨耶

19:00～
渡辺 亜紗美・溝呂木 世蘭・永井 日菜

集合時間： 17:45
イベントスタート： 18:00

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英語

From 6:00 pm:
Yuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

From 7:00 pm:
Asami Watanabe, Seran Kuroki, Hina Nagai

Doors open at 5:45 pm
Even starts at 6:00 pm

[Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA]
--There's no space to view the event since it's taking place inside the store.
--Please take care of your own belongings as the store doesn't have any locker.
--You can make a call to reserve (we might limit the number of tickets you can purchase via phone call).

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/20 03:25:57

元の翻訳
From 6:00 pm:
Yuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

From 7:00 pm:
Asami Watanabe, Seran Kuroki, Hina Nagai

Doors open at 5:45 pm
Even starts at 6:00 pm

[Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA]
--There's no space to view the event since it's taking place inside the store.
--Please take care of your own belongings as the store doesn't have any locker.
--You can make a call to reserve (we might limit the number of tickets you can purchase via phone call).

修正後
From 6:00 pm:
Yuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

From 7:00 pm:
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Hina Nagai

Doors open at 5:45 pm
Event starts at 6:00 pm

[Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA]
--There's no space to view the event since it's taking place inside the store.
--Please take care of your own belongings as the store doesn't have any lockers.
--You can make reservations via telephone (we might limit the number of tickets you can purchase via phone call).

It's good, but one needs to make sure that the names are right, especially with the readings publicly and readily available.