翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

登録内容に少し間違いがあります。

我々からは3名がそのカンファレンスに参加します。
参加するメンバーは以下の通りです。

XXXX

先程、私自身の登録は指定のURLから済ませましたのでご確認ください。

英語

There is a mistake about the registered content.

Three of us will participate the conference.
The members are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration is done only a while ago from the URL I was told, so please make sure about that.

レビュー ( 1 )

big_baby_duckはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/16 15:54:37

元の翻訳
There is a mistake about the registered content.

Three of us will participate the conference.
The members are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration is done only a while ago from the URL I was told, so please make sure about that.

修正後
There is a little mistake in the contents of the registration.

Three of us will participate in the conference.
The members to join are mentioned below.

xxxx

My own registration was done at the specified URL shortly before now, so please check it.

I hope this review is helpful. A while ago means weeks, a month, or months ago in many cases.