翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

次のステップとして、このタームシートを先方に提示し、交渉を始めたいと思います。当初の予定ではAをDに添付する予定でしたが、Dの締結交渉を早く終わらせる必要があることから（交渉期限は今年末まで）、とりあえずこのタームシートを締結してＡの締結を後回しにしたいと思います。タームシートを締結すれば（Ａの締結がＤ締結より後になっても）当方に不利益は生じる可能性は低いものと考えていますが、そのような理解でよろしいでしょうか？

英語

As the next step, I would like to propose this term sheet and start negotiation. Although it was planned to attach A to D, I would like to first conclude this term sheet before concluding A, for the negotiation for conclusion of D needs to be done fast (the negotiation limit is until the end of this year). If we conclude the term sheet (even the concluding A is after concluding D), I believe the possibility of us receiving disadvantage is low, but would it be fair to say so?

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acdcasicはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/12 02:12:03

元の翻訳
As the next step, I would like to propose this term sheet and start negotiation. Although it was planned to attach A to D, I would like to first conclude this term sheet before concluding A, for the negotiation for conclusion of D needs to be done fast (the negotiation limit is until the end of this year). If we conclude the term sheet (even the concluding A is after concluding D), I believe the possibility of us receiving disadvantage is low, but would it be fair to say so?

修正後
As the next step, I would like to propose this term sheet and start the negotiation. Although it was planned to attach A to D, I would like to first conclude this term sheet before concluding A, because the negotiation for conclusion of D needs to be done fast (the negotiation deadline is the end of this year). If we conclude the term sheet (even if the concluding A is after concluding D), I believe it will very unlikely be our disadvantage, but would it be fair to say so?

最後の部分を直訳からもう少し自然にしてみました。いかがでしょう

[larissad33]

最後の一文で悩みました。ご指摘のとおりの表現が、とても自然ですね。ありがとうございます。