翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/06/06 19:45:25

日本語

開催日:2014年8月23日(土)
時間:13:00~17:00
会場:勝山市民会館(福井県勝山市元町1丁目5-16)
[大阪・京都方面から]
JR大阪駅より富山行きのサンダーバードに乗車(約1時間50分)→ JR福井駅より勝山・永平寺行きのえちぜん鉄道勝山永平寺線に乗り換え(約50分)→ 勝山駅
[名古屋・米原方面から]
JR名古屋駅より富山行きのしらさぎ号に乗車(約2時間)→ JR福井駅より勝山・永平寺行きのえちぜん鉄道勝山永平寺線に乗り換え(約50分)→ 勝山駅

英語

Opening Date: August 23th, 2014 (Sat)
Time: 13:00 ~ 17:00
Location: Katsuyama Civilian Hall (5-16, 1 Chomei, Maru Machi, Katsuyama City, Fukui Province)
[From direction of Osaka, Kyoto]
Express “ThunderBird” (Toyama Direction)at JR Osaka Station (About 1hour and 50 minutes)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;
[From direction of Nagoya, Yonehara]
Express “Shirasagi” (Toyama Direction)at JR Nagoya Station (About 2hours)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;

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kazue_ishikawa 51 イギリスでの留学経験を生かしてメーカーや国際協力機関で通訳や翻訳を5年間担...
kazue_ishikawaはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/06/08 20:51:33

元の翻訳
Opening Date: August 23th, 2014 (Sat)
Time: 13:00 ~ 17:00
Location: Katsuyama Civilian Hall (5-16, 1 Chomei, Maru Machi, Katsuyama City, Fukui Province)
[From direction of Osaka, Kyoto]
Express “ThunderBird” (Toyama Direction)at JR Osaka Station (About 1hour and 50 minutes)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;
[From direction of Nagoya, Yonehara]
Express “Shirasagi” (Toyama Direction)at JR Nagoya Station (About 2hours)→ Get down at JR Fukui Station and then ride the Line "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) by the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Get down at Katsuyama Station;

修正後
Opening Date: Saturday, August 23rd, 2014
Time: 13:00 ~ 17:00
Location: Katsuyama Civic Hall (5-16, 1 Chomei, Maru Machi, Katsuyama City, Fukui Province)
[Direction from Osaka and Kyoto]
Express “ThunderBird” (toward Toyama) from JR Osaka Station (About 1hour and 50 minutes)→ Change at JR Fukui Station to "Eiheiji" line (toward Katsuyama, Eiheiji) of Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Katsuyama Station;
[From Nagoya and Yonehara]
Express “Shirasagi” (toward Toyama) from JR Nagoya Station (About 2hours)→ Change at JR Fukui Station and to "Eiheiji Sen"(Katsuyama, Eiheiji Direction) of the Echizen Railway (About 50 minutes)→ Katsuyama Station;

地名は調べるのにも時間がかかって手間がかかりますね。

blackhand_trooper blackhand_trooper 2014/06/09 09:15:08

Thanks for your help

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