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伝票作成依頼
△株式会社様　いつもお世話になっています。
○株式会社の■です。
添付したエクセルのUPS伝票作成お願いします。
箱数は２箱です。

英語

Commission for fill-in form.

△ Corporation

Thank you always for your cooperation.

This is ■ from ◯ Corporation.
Could you please fill in Excel's UPS forms attached.

The number of box is two.

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ryojiyonoはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/05/27 17:31:25

元の翻訳
Commission for fill-in form.

△ Corporation

Thank you always for your cooperation.↵
↵
This is ■ from ◯ Corporation.
Could you please fill in Excel's UPS forms attached.

The number of box is two.

修正後
Subject : Request of issuing UPS shipping documents

Dear a person in charge at △ Corporation

I would like you to fill in the UPS shipping documents that I have attached in Excel format and return it to me. Please do so for two boxes.
Thank you very much for you usual support.

Sincerely yours,↵
↵
■ ↵
◯ Corporation

[hidessy]

添削ありがとうございます。ビジネスレターらしくなり、非常に勉強になります。