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日本語

【CD販売に関して】
販売/予約受付スタート：各会場 開場の2時間前から(予定)

［特典1］
5月21日発売シングル『十字架 ～映画「学校の怪談 -呪いの言霊-」 Ver.～』をご予約の方に以下の特典をプレゼント致します。

1枚予約・・・ご当地生写真(1枚)　※商品と一緒にお届け。
3形態同時予約・・・「記念撮影会」参加券(1枚)

「記念撮影会」の参加券をお持ちの方は終演後に開催される「記念撮影会」にご参加頂けます。

英語

[About CD Sale]
Sale/Advance Order begins 2 hours before the opening. (Schedule might change.)

[Benefit 1]
Customers who purchased the single CD on the May 21st sale, "Jujika～The Movie「Gakko no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-」 Ver.～ " will get the following benefits.

For customers who purchased one CD: A real picture of the place in the film. *I will be sent with the product.
For customers who made an advance order for all three types: A ticket for "Commemorative Photograph Event."
*Customers who have the ticket can join the "Commemorative Photograph Event" which will be held after the performance.

レビュー ( 1 )

ichi_style1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/24 20:06:36

元の翻訳
[About CD Sale]
Sale/Advance Order begins 2 hours before the opening. (Schedule might change.)

[Benefit 1]
Customers who purchased the single CD on the May 21st sale, "Jujika～The Movie「Gakko no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-」 Ver.～ " will get the following benefits.

For customers who purchased one CD: A real picture of the place in the film. *I will be sent with the product.
For customers who made an advance order for all three types: A ticket for "Commemorative Photograph Event."
*Customers who have the ticket can join the "Commemorative Photograph Event" which will be held after the performance.

修正後
[About CD Sale]
Sale/Advance Order begins 2 hours before the opening. (Schedule might change.)

[Benefit 1]
Customers who purchased the single CD on the May 21st sale, "Jujika～The Movie「Gakko no Kaidan -Noroi no Kotoba-」 Ver.～ " will get the following benefits.

For customers who purchased one CD: A real picture of the place in the film. *Will be sent with the product.
For customers who made an advance order for all three types: A ticket for the "Commemorative Photograph Event."
*Customers who have the ticket can join the "Commemorative Photograph Event" which will be held after the performance.