翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

確認したところ、日本に輸入する場合
御社の社印が押された正式な書類として
成分表（ Ingredient ）と製造工程表が必要になるようです。
この2つを私宛に送っていただくことは可能でしょうか？
難しい場合、改めて商品を発注しますので
そちらに同梱して送っていただきたいと思います。
加えて、
先日発注した分について積み込み年月日と到着予定年月日を
教えていただきたいと思います。

英語

I have confirmed that you need an ingredient table and a production flow chart as formal documents with your corporate seal if you want to import to Japan.
Is it possible to send me the two documents?
Because I will place an order again if it is difficult, I would like you to send by including those.
In addition,
Please let me know the shipping data and the arrival date for the items which I have ordered the other day.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/04 23:09:20

元の翻訳
I have confirmed that you need an ingredient table and a production flow chart as formal documents with your corporate seal if you want to import to Japan.
Is it possible to send me the two documents?
Because I will place an order again if it is difficult, I would like you to send by including those.
In addition,↵
Please let me know the shipping data and the arrival date for the items which I have ordered the other day.

修正後
I have confirmed that you need an ingredient table and a production flow chart as formal documents with your corporate seal if you want to import to Japan.
Is it possible to send me the two documents?
Because I will place an order again if it is difficult, I would like you to ship including those.
In addition, please let me know the shipping date and the arrival date for the items I ordered the other day.

[hideyuki]

添削ありがとうございました。

[[削除済みユーザ]]

1.輸入するのは「私」と思われるので、1行目"you need ..." は"I need ...", "if you want to import to Japan" は "when i imprt it to Japan"になると思います。
2."Because I will place an order again if it is difficult,I would like you to ..."は "if it is difficult, I will place an order again and would like you to ..."のほうが流れがスムーズかと思います。他の方がすでに指摘されていますが"shipping data" →"shipping date".

[hideyuki]

レビューありがとうございました。ご指摘の通りだと思います。