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4月14日、台湾南西部の高雄市に新しい展示場、kaohsiung Exhibition Center：KECがオープンした。
この日はグランドオープンと、こけら落としとなる展示会、Taiwan International Fastener Showの開会式がメインエントランス前の広場で開催された。
オープニングセレモニーには元高雄市長も務めた呉敦義副総統が駆けつけたほか、陳菊高雄市長など多くの関係者が期待と祝いの言葉を述べた。
セレモニーは120のメディアと600人の参加者を集めた
New exhibition hall, kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC was opened on 14th Ａpril.
There were held grand-opneing and the opening ceremony of Taiwan International Fastenster Show, the first exhibition of KEC at an open space in front of the main entrance on this day.
At opening ceremony, many affilites including Wu Den-yin, the ex-city mayor attended and Chen Chu delivered congratulatory addresses.
There are 120 medias and 600 participants on the ceremony.
レビュー ( 2 )
元の翻訳
New exhibition hall, kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC was opened on 14th Ａpril.
There were held grand-opneing and the opening ceremony of Taiwan International Fastenster Show, the first exhibition of KEC at an open space in front of the main entrance on this day.
At opening ceremony, many affilites including Wu Den-yin, the ex-city mayor attended and Chen Chu delivered congratulatory addresses.
There are 120 medias and 600 participants on the ceremony.
修正後
A new exhibition hall Kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC opened on April 14.
There were held [why inversion?] grand-opneing [spelling] and the opening ceremony of the Taiwan International Fastenster Show, the first exhibition of KEC at an open space in front of the main entrance on this day.
At [article] opening ceremony, many affilites [word choice] including Wu Den-yin, the ex mayor attended [awkward] and Chen Chu [missing text] delivered congratulatory addresses.
There are [tense confusion] 120 medias ["media" is plural] and 600 participants on the ceremony.
このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。
元の翻訳
New exhibition hall, kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC was opened on 14th Ａpril.
There were held grand-opneing and the opening ceremony of Taiwan International Fastenster Show, the first exhibition of KEC at an open space in front of the main entrance on this day.
At opening ceremony, many affilites including Wu Den-yin, the ex-city mayor attended and Chen Chu delivered congratulatory addresses.
There are 120 medias and 600 participants on the ceremony.
修正後
New exhibition hall, kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC was opened on 14th Ａpril.
There were held grand-opneing and the opening ceremony of Taiwan International Fastenster Show, the first exhibition of KEC at an open space in front of the main entrance on this day.
At opening ceremony, many affilites including Wu Den-yin, the ex-city mayor attended and Chen Chu delivered congratulatory addresses.
There are 120 medias and 600 participants on the ceremony.
このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。
hideyuki
2014/04/17 14:13:50
A new exhibition hall, kaohsiung Exhibition Center: KEC opened on 14th of April.
修正方法間違え失礼しました。
下記のように修正されてはいかがでしょうか
The grand-opening, the opening exhibition, and the opening ceremony of Taiwan International Fastenster Show were held at the square in front of the main entrance on the day.
At the opening ceremony, the former mayor, vice-president Wu Den-yin, attended and many affiliates including the mayor Mr. Chen Chu addressed expectations and congratulations.
120 media and 600 participants attended the ceremony.