翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: You can go ahead and make the payment. The products will ship out next week. Most likely Wednesday or Thursday.
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日本語

メールいただきました件、了解いたしました。
本日は土曜日で銀行が休日なので、来週の月曜日にご入金します。
入金が完了しましたら、再度ご連絡いたします。

よろしくお願いいたします。

英語

I understand.
Since the bank is closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is complete, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

レビュー ( 3 )

psychonyakuはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/05 09:34:55

元の翻訳
I understand.
Since the bank is closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is complete, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

修正後
I understand what was sent in the e-mail.
Today is Saturday in Japan and banks are closed, so will make the deposit on Monday.
When the money has been deposited, I will contact you.

Best Regards.

この場合は「入金」が「deposit」を意味しますが。
入金「http://dictionary.goo.ne.jp/leaf/jn2/168172/m0u/%E5%85%A5%E9%87%91/」
　　「http://dictionary.goo.ne.jp/leaf/je2/57670/m0u/%E5%85%A5%E9%87%91/」

[susumu-fukuhara]

確かに入金はdepositの方がいいかもしれませんね。ご指摘のとおりです。

susumu-fukuharaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/05 11:58:17

元の翻訳
I understand.
Since the bank is closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is complete, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

修正後
I understand.
Since the banks are closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is completed, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

どちらかというと payment is completedの方が語法的には適切に思います。あとはうまく訳せていると思います。

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/04/06 11:26:56

元の翻訳
I understand.
Since the bank is closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is complete, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

修正後
I understand what you wrote in your email.
Because today is Saturday and the bank is closed, I will make the payment on Monday.
When the payment has been made, I will contact you again.

Best Regards,