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日本語

いつも迅速な対応をありがとうございます
また商品を注文させていただきたいのですが、下記の4つの住所宛にそれぞれ一つづつ１１０Ⅴ,USプラグのヒーターを送ってくれませんか？

ペイパルで支払をさせていただきます。
すべてまとめてお支払した方がいいですか？別々に支払いをした方がいいですか？

商品を送る際に、仕入れ値が分かってしまうようなタグやカードなどの同梱はお控えいただけましたら幸いです。


東京都世田谷区用賀２－２－２,伊藤様方
有限会社田中　代表取締役　田中たけし

英語

Thank you for your prompt attention as akways.
I would like to place an order again. Could you please send one US plug heater of 110V to each of the following 4 addresses?

I will make a payment via PayPal.
Would it be better to pay all at once? Or do you prefer that I make a payment separately?

Also, I would appreciate if you could avoid including tags and cards that may reveal the cost price when you send items.

Tanaka Ltd. CEO Takeshi Tanaka
c/o Mr. Ito
Yoga 2-2-2 Setagaya-ku Tokyo

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/28 18:51:35

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt attention as akways.
I would like to place an order again. Could you please send one US plug heater of 110V to each of the following 4 addresses?

I will make a payment via PayPal.
Would it be better to pay all at once? Or do you prefer that I make a payment separately?

Also, I would appreciate if you could avoid including tags and cards that may reveal the cost price when you send items.

Tanaka Ltd. CEO Takeshi Tanaka
c/o Mr. Ito
Yoga 2-2-2 Setagaya-ku Tokyo

修正後
Thank you for your prompt attention as always.
I would like to place an order again. Could you please send 1 unit each of heater with 110v US plug to following 4 addresses?

I will make a payment via PayPal.
Would it be better to pay all at once? Or do you prefer that I make a payment separately?

Also, I would appreciate if you could avoid including tags and cards that may reveal the purchase price when you send items.

Tanaka Ltd. CEO Takeshi Tanaka
c/o Mr. Ito
Yoga 2-2-2 Setagaya-ku Tokyo

[3_yumie7]

添削、ありがとうございました。勉強になりました。