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評価: 47 / 2 Reviews / 2014/03/26 22:10:48

meg6
meg6 47 翻訳のスキルアップを目指しています。 依頼者の意図、気持ちを汲んだ丁寧な...
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英語

As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

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kazue_ishikawa 51 イギリスでの留学経験を生かしてメーカーや国際協力機関で通訳や翻訳を5年間担...
kazue_ishikawaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/26 23:50:32

元の翻訳
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you a member ID and password later.
It takes about 1 to 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you don’t get through the screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

meg6 meg6 2014/03/27 10:10:05

ありがとうございます!

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/03/27 01:26:06

元の翻訳
As well, if your screening accepted safely, we are going to send you member ID and password later.
※It takes about 1 or 3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening, we will notice you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

修正後
As well, if your screening accepted safely [awkward phrasing], we are going to send you a member ID and password later.
※It takes 1-3 business days.

We are sorry but, if you un adapted at screening [incomprehensible], we will notice [wrong verb] you with the resason of why.
To complete your entry, you need to confirm insufficient contents.

We appreciate your understanding.

meg6 meg6 2014/03/27 10:10:19

ありがとうございます!

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