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評価: 50 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/03/19 13:18:00

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日本語

国立がん研究センター(中央病院、東病院)では臨床に使用できるあらゆるX線、γ線、電子線が利用できる装置を備えている他、国立がん研究センター東病院では1998年終わりから陽子線治療を開始し、頭頸部腫瘍、肺がん、肝がん、前立腺がんなどに適用されています

放射線ががんを死滅させることができる理由
放射線は、細胞のDNAに直接作用して細胞が分裂して数を増加させる能力をなくしたり、細胞が自ら死んでいく過程であるアポトーシスという現象を増強したりして細胞を死に至らしめます。

英語

National Cancer Center (Central Hospital, Hospital East) has devices for X-ray, Y-ray, electron beam in clinical, and the National Cancer Center Hospital East has begun a proton beam treatment for head and neck neoplasm, pulmonary carcinoma, liver cancer, prostate cancer since late of 1998.

The reason why radiation can kill cancer.
Radiation invalidates the cell division by direct action on DNA of cell, and kills cell by enhancing a phenomenon called apoptosis, the process of programmed cell death.

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mars16 50 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります(スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/25 19:16:32

元の翻訳
National Cancer Center (Central Hospital, Hospital East) has devices for X-ray, Y-ray, electron beam in clinical, and the National Cancer Center Hospital East has begun a proton beam treatment for head and neck neoplasm, pulmonary carcinoma, liver cancer, prostate cancer since late of 1998.

The reason why radiation can kill cancer.
Radiation invalidates the cell division by direct action on DNA of cell, and kills cell by enhancing a phenomenon called apoptosis, the process of programmed cell death.

修正後
The National Cancer Center (Central Hospital, Hospital East) has devices for X-ray, Y-ray, and electron beam in clinical, and the National Cancer Center Hospital East has begun a proton beam treatment for head and neck neoplasm, pulmonary carcinoma, liver cancer, and prostate cancer since late of 1998.

The reason why radiation can kill cancer:
Radiation invalidates the cell division by direct action on DNA of cell, and kills cell by enhancing a phenomenon called apoptosis, which is the process of programmed cell death.

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