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評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2014/03/18 21:06:26

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
日本語

放射線治療の利点は、手術によって切除することなく、がんに対して治療効果を期待できることで、臓器をそのまま残したり、臓器の働きをがんになる前と同じようにしておけることです。がんの種類によって放射線治療の効果(効きやすさ、治りやすさ)は大きく異なり、治療の場所などによって副作用の起こり方もさまざまです。病期などでわかるがんの状態、体調やこれまでの治療の内容などをもとに、放射線治療を行うかどうか、また、どのように行うかについて検討されます。

英語

The benefits of radiation therapy is that the therapeutic effects for cancer can be expected without having to surgically remove the affected areas, thus keeping the organs intact, or keeping the function of the organs the same as before the patient fell ill with cancer. The effects (effectiveness or the degree of healing achieved) can vary significantly depending on the type of the cancer, and the side effects can vary from the position of the treatment area. Applicability of the radiation therapy, and how it should be applied, when applicable, will be examined based on the clinical condition determined by the stage of cancer, patient's condition, and the treatment histories.

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[削除済みユーザ] 59 I have my Bachelor's Degree in Japano...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/24 01:57:55

元の翻訳
The benefits of radiation therapy is that the therapeutic effects for cancer can be expected without having to surgically remove the affected areas, thus keeping the organs intact, or keeping the function of the organs the same as before the patient fell ill with cancer. The effects (effectiveness or the degree of healing achieved) can vary significantly depending on the type of the cancer, and the side effects can vary from the position of the treatment area. Applicability of the radiation therapy, and how it should be applied, when applicable, will be examined based on the clinical condition determined by the stage of cancer, patient's condition, and the treatment histories.

修正後
The advantage of radiation therapy is that the therapeutic effects for cancer can be expected without having to surgically remove the affected areas, thus keeping the organs intact, and keeping the function of the organs the same as before the patient was inflicted with cancer. The effects (effectiveness or the degree of healing achieved) can vary significantly depending on the type of the cancer, and the side effects can vary from the position of the treatment area. Applicability of the radiation therapy, and how it should be applied, when applicable, will be examined based on the clinical condition determined by the stage of the cancer, the patient's condition, and his treatment history.

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