翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

今の僕の幸せは、君の笑顔を見ることです。

もちろん、今後もその為の努力は怠らないし、君との約束「嘘をつかない」「浮気をしない」は守ります。

だから、これからの人生、ずっと僕の隣にいて、笑顔を見せて欲しい。
僕の幸せが一生続くように・・・・。

結婚してください。

英語

My happiness now is to see your smiling.

Of course, I will not fail to make an effort for it from now, and I will observe a promise with you that
"I will not tell a lie" and "I don't have a love affair with other woman".

For this reason, I want you to be with me and show me your smile for the rest of my life.
I hope that my happiness continues forever.

Please marry me.

レビュー ( 1 )

natsukioはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/17 00:59:10

元の翻訳
My happiness now is to see your smiling.

Of course, I will not fail to make an effort for it from now, and I will observe a promise with you that
"I will not tell a lie" and "I don't have a love affair with other woman".

For this reason, I want you to be with me and show me your smile for the rest of my life.
I hope that my happiness continues forever.

Please marry me.

修正後
My happiness now is to see you smile.

Of course, I will not fail to make an effort for it from now, and I will keep the promise we made;
"I will not tell a lie" and "I don't have a love affair with other woman".

For this reason, I want you to be with me and show me your smile for the rest of my life.
I hope that my happiness continues forever.

Please marry me.