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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/02/28 00:33:28

日本語

Partition Love

あなたが指差した 鍵かっこ空欄に
ヒントもらいながら 英単語を埋めてく
おでことおでこがくっつきそうな距離感に
色づいた 春の花になった私です

止まない鼓動に
“ヒソメテソットイキヲヒソメテ”
隣の席まで 気持ちがあふれ出ちゃわないかな

ねぇ、先生
私の知らないことをやさしく教えて
あなたにもっと近づきたい
子供でいたくない
ねぇ、先生
友達じゃきっとわからないこと 教えて
この想いどうすればいいの?
あなたに届けたい
Partition Love

英語

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the square brackets you are pointing to
trying to fill the English words with your hints
I am a colored spring flower

the beats that never stops
"hide it hide it"
wondering the beats could reach the next seat

dear my teacher
teach me what I don't know
I don't wanna be a child anymore
my teacher
teach me what my friends don't know
how can I tell my love to you?
I wanna tell you
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ldiary 50
ldiaryはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/02 16:38:05

元の翻訳
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the square brackets you are pointing to
trying to fill the English words with your hints
I am a colored spring flower

the beats that never stops
"hide it hide it"
wondering the beats could reach the next seat

dear my teacher
teach me what I don't know
I don't wanna be a child anymore
my teacher
teach me what my friends don't know
how can I tell my love to you?
I wanna tell you
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修正後
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The blank square brackets you pointed at
Filling it with English words by the hints from you
The inner feelings as our foreheads get closer together
Has coloured my world like a blooming flower in the spring

these beats that would never stop
"hide it, oh how can I hide it"
I just wish it would not overflow until the next seat

My dear teacher
Teach me gently what I don't know
I want to get closer to you
I don't want to be a child any more
My dear teacher
Teach me what my friends don't know
How can I tell my love to you?
This feeling, I want to let you know
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Some of the lines where not translated.

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