翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

さて、本日はお集まり頂きましてありがとうございます。
まず、参加者の自己紹介から始めたいと思います。
A事務所の方には、議事録作成のために立ち会っていただきました。


まずは、第一期の概要についてご説明いたします。
最初に第一期の活動について、Bさんから説明します。
次に、支出の明細について、Cさんから説明します。
なお、当初第一期は1年間の予定でしたが、D取得の遅れにより、第一期を14ヶ月としております。

以上が第一期のご説明ですが疑問等ありますでしょうか？

英語

Well,thank you for coming today.
Firstly,I would like to introduce myself.
For those of A office, we have witnessed for the proceedings preparation.

First of all, I would like an overview of the first phase.
On the activities of the first phase, I will explain from Mr. B first.
Next, the details of spending, I will explain from the C's.
It should be noted that the first phase originally was scheduled for one year, but due to the delay of D acquisition, the Company has a 14-month first phase.

Would you like question?

レビュー ( 1 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/01/08 16:23:25

元の翻訳
Well,thank you for coming today.
Firstly,I would like to introduce myself.
For those of A office, we have witnessed for the proceedings preparation.

First of all, I would like an overview of the first phase.
On the activities of the first phase, I will explain from Mr. B first.
Next, the details of spending, I will explain from the C's.
It should be noted that the first phase originally was scheduled for one year, but due to the delay of D acquisition, the Company has a 14-month first phase.

Would you like question?

修正後
Well, thank you for coming today.
Firstly, I would like to introduce all participants.
For those from A office, we have asked them to attend this meeting to create meeting minutes.

First of all, I would like to provide an overview of the first phase.
Mr. B will first describe the activities from the first phase.
Next, Mr. C will provide the details of spending.
It should be noted that the first phase originally was scheduled for one year, but due to the delay of D acquisition, the Company has a 14-month first phase.

Do you have any question on the first phase just being described so far?

僭越ながら、アドバイスさせていただきますと、文章が完全でない箇所がいくつか見受けられました。