翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

Sサイズを購入予定です。Sサイズの具体的な欠陥を教えていただけますか？できれば写真も見たいです。

英語

I will purchase a S-size. Could you tell me a concrete defect? If possible, I'd like to watch its photo.

レビュー ( 1 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/07 00:47:41

元の翻訳
I will purchase a S-size. Could you tell me a concrete defect? If possible, I'd like to watch its photo.

修正後
I will purchase the S-size. Could you tell me the exact defect? If possible, I'd like to see a photo.

Some small but significant errors. Be careful with see and watch. You watch something that moves or should be moving.

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