翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 44 / 1 Review / 2013/12/17 11:28:49
昨日はご来社いただきありがとうございます。
これから***さんと仕事できるのが楽しみです。
タイムシートを送りますので、作業時間を入力してください。
何かわからないことがあればご連絡ください。
Thank you for your coming yesterday.
I am so happy to work with ****
I will send you time sheet, so please write down your working time.
if you have a question, please feel free to contact me.
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元の翻訳
Thank you for your coming yesterday.
I am so happy to work with ****
I will send you time sheet, so please write down your working time.
if you have a question, please feel free to contact me.
修正後
Thank you for coming yesterday.
I am looking forward to working with ****
I will send you a time sheet, so please write down your working time.
If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.
Be careful with grammar and proofreading. I worry that the *** should actually be 'you' but I guess we can't make that call. Be careful of 'any' and plurals