翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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英語

Thank you very much for your email.
Sincere apology for the inconvenience caused.

We would be extra careful from now on.
As a way of showing our apology, please kindly find the enclosed Japanese photo folder.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/20 01:57:49

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your email.
Sincere apology for the inconvenience caused.

We would be extra careful from now on.
As a way of showing our apology, please kindly find the enclosed Japanese photo folder.

修正後
Thank you very much for your contact.
Sincerest apologies for the inconvenience caused.

We will be extra careful from now on.
As a way of showing our apology, please kindly find the enclosed Japanese photo folder.

They didn't necessarily say that the contact was an email so I don't think we can assume that! Also there were a few mistakes with the English such as 'would' and 'sincere apology'. (You can say 'Please accept our sincere apology', but you can't just use that alone)

[l_otake]

Thank you very much for your comments and corrections.