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日本語

日本コンベンション事業協会（CPA）の女性部会は9月13日、つくば国際会議場で「女性部会　つくば防災訓練および交流フォーラム」を実施した。
CPAでは今年5月に「東京臨海広域防災公園体験ツアー」を行なうなど、防災に関するさまざまな取組みを行なっており、今回は防災関連活動としてつくば国際会議場の防災訓練に参加し、避難誘導などを体験した。
午後の部ではつくば国際会議場の視察と、地元MICE業界の交流およびCPAのPR活動の一環として、同館の中会議室で「交流フォーラム」を開催した。

英語

Women's department of Convention Planners Association of Japan (CPA) hold a meeting on "Women's Department: Emergency Drill and Inter-communicative Forum in Tukuba" in International Congress Center. CPA is taking some activities such as "Experience Tour for Preventing Oceanfront and Broad Area Disaster in Tokyo" in May of this year and in this time we had experiences of evacuation guidance program which includes disaster drill at the International Congress Center as a part of related-activity of disaster defense.
In afternoon session, inspection of the International Congress Center and "Interactive forum" in an effort to interact with local MICE industry and present PR activities by CPA was gone through.

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elephantransはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/18 13:05:10

元の翻訳
Women's department of Convention Planners Association of Japan (CPA) hold a meeting on "Women's Department: Emergency Drill and Inter-communicative Forum in Tukuba" in International Congress Center. CPA is taking some activities such as "Experience Tour for Preventing Oceanfront and Broad Area Disaster in Tokyo" in May of this year and in this time we had experiences of evacuation guidance program which includes disaster drill at the International Congress Center as a part of related-activity of disaster defense.
In afternoon session, inspection of the International Congress Center and "Interactive forum" in an effort to interact with local MICE industry and present PR activities by CPA was gone through.

修正後
Women's department of Convention Planners Association of Japan (CPA) held a meeting on "Women's Department: Emergency Drill and Inter-communicative Forum in Tukuba" at the Tsukuba International Congress Center. CPA is taking some activities such as "Experience Tour for Preventing Oceanfront and Broad Area Disaster in Tokyo" in May of this year and in this time we had experiences of evacuation guidance program which includes disaster drill at the Tsukuba International Congress Center as a part of related-activity of disaster defense.
In afternoon session, inspection of the International Congress Center and "Interactive forum" in an effort to interact with local MICE industry and present PR activities by CPA was gone through.

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