翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

出張のためご連絡が遅くなりました。大変申し訳ございません。
Stage2はとても魅力的な商品ですが、今回は見送らせていただきます。

1点質問があります。以前購入したRBZ Tour4ですが、
TourIssueの同モデルの他ヘッドに比べて、6～7g程重いです。
数点であれば、個体差と解釈できますが、今まで購入した数十点全てが
同じような重量です(225g程度)

もし理由が分かれば教えて欲しいです。

英語

I was out of town and am very sorry for the late reply.
Although Stage2 seems very attractive product, I would like to pass on this time.

I have one question. The RBZ Tour4 I purchased before is 6-7g heavier than other heads of similar TourIssue models. If the differences were seen in only a few items, they would be considered as individual variability. But all the several dozen I purchased weighed similar so far (approx. 225g).

Could you explain the reason?

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shibataはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/03 08:39:22

元の翻訳
I was out of town and am very sorry for the late reply.
Although Stage2 seems very attractive product, I would like to pass on this time.

I have one question. The RBZ Tour4 I purchased before is 6-7g heavier than other heads of similar TourIssue models. If the differences were seen in only a few items, they would be considered as individual variability. But all the several dozen I purchased weighed similar so far (approx. 225g).

Could you explain the reason?

修正後
I was out of town and am very sorry for the late reply.
Stage2 seems a very attractive product, however, I choose not to buy it this time.

I have one question. The RBZ Tour4 models that I purchased before are 6-7g heavier than other heads of similar TourIssue models. If the differences were seen in only a few items, they would be considered as individual variability. But all of the several dozen I purchased weighed similar so far (approx. 225g).

Could you explain the reason?

「個体差」をより厳密に訳するとしたら、allowable dispersion （品質上許容できるばらつき）という言葉もあるようです。

[piro627]

ありがとうございます。dispersionの方がこういった文章では一般的なのでしょうか？
単語帳に追加しておきたいと思います。

[shibata]

この文章は、工学系の専門文でもなさそうなので、allowable dispersionはやや堅苦しい気がしました。

[piro627]

ただ訳すというだけでなく、文章にあった適切な語句を選別するというのは難しいですね。ありがとうございます。