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評価: 59 / 1 Review / 2013/08/20 12:21:42

zuzustan
zuzustan 59 -TOEIC930点 仕事で英語を使い始めて3年になります。 ビジネス...
日本語

ご連絡ありがとうございますWatanosatoです。日本との時差で返信が遅くなって申し訳ございません。お調べいたしましたが日本国内で追跡できるのはサンタモニカのどこかの郵便局に保管されているという所まででした。
こちらでも調べてみますが、回答に1週間以上かかると郵便局から言われました。
USPSのピンク色の不在票が入ってませんでしたか?そこに配達した郵便局が記載されているはずなのですが。

USPSのフリーダイアルは以下の番号
800-222-1811

HPからの再配達は以下のURLから

英語

This is Watanosato, thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for my late reply due to time lag.
I checked with your goods here in Japan, but I found out only that they are stored somewhere in Santa Monica.
I will continue searching, but the post office said it would take more than 1 week to get reply.
Didn't you find any pink USPS envelope of delivery absence notice in your post?
On that notice, the postal office which delivered your goods was written.

USPS free dial number is below,
800-222-1811

Please check the below URL to request re-delivery from HP

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robbaranはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/20 16:16:28

元の翻訳
This is Watanosato, thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for my late reply due to time lag.
I checked with your goods here in Japan, but I found out only that they are stored somewhere in Santa Monica.
I will continue searching, but the post office said it would take more than 1 week to get reply.
Didn't you find any pink USPS envelope of delivery absence notice in your post?
On that notice, the postal office which delivered your goods was written.

USPS free dial number is below,
800-222-1811

Please check the below URL to request re-delivery from HP

修正後
This is Watanosato, thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for my late reply due to the time lag.
I checked with your goods here in Japan, but I found out only that they are stored in a Post Office somewhere in Santa Monica.
I will continue searching, but the post office said it would take more than 1 week to get a reply.
Did you find a pink USPS notice of delivery absence in your mail?
On that notice, the postal office to which your goods were delivered was written.

USPS free dial number is below,
800-222-1811

Please check the below URL to request re-delivery from HP

"On that notice, the postal office to which your goods were delivered was written." still sounds awkward to me. I would suggest avoiding passive structure here.

zuzustan zuzustan 2013/08/20 23:55:41

Thank you very much for your comment!

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