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日本語

新品の高級天然碁石、日向特製本蛤碁石(メキシコ産)・那智黒碁石25号実用の出品。25号とは蛤碁石の厚みの事で厚みは約7.0mm。 天然の蛤碁石は上品な縞目・自然色を、那智黒碁石はしっかりした天然の黒感を楽しめる

那智黒碁石は品質保護の為に簡単に油拭きしているので使用前に空拭き

蛤碁石：180粒、那智黒碁石：181粒（正規数）

　永年の囲碁愛好家に最も好まれる碁石が、蛤碁石・那智黒碁石。囲碁対局の中に自然を楽しむ趣きが増す。未体験者は蛤碁石・那智黒碁石の使い心地・高級感が堪能可能。

英語

We show the high-grade natural go stone (yunzi), clam(from Mexco) go stone special made in Hyuga(Miyazaki pre.), and Nachi black go stone No. 25 practical use. The No.25 means the thickness of a clam go stone, it has about 7.0 mm thick. As for the natural clam go stone, you can enjoy beautiful lines and natural color, as for the Nachi black go stone has natural deep black color.

Nachi black go stone is covered with oil simply, because of quality protection. Please wipe it with a dry cloth before using.

clam go stone：180, Nachi black go stone：181(regular number)

The clam and Nachi black go stone which are liked most by long-time Go fan.
During the go game people can enjoy more the feeling of nature. It is possible for beginners just enjoy the feel, the sense of quality of the clam go stone and the Nachi black go stone.

レビュー ( 1 )

juemon1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/07 10:34:10

元の翻訳
We show the high-grade natural go stone (yunzi), clam(from Mexco) go stone special made in Hyuga(Miyazaki pre.), and Nachi black go stone No. 25 practical use. The No.25 means the thickness of a clam go stone, it has about 7.0 mm thick. As for the natural clam go stone, you can enjoy beautiful lines and natural color, as for the Nachi black go stone has natural deep black color.

Nachi black go stone is covered with oil simply, because of quality protection. Please wipe it with a dry cloth before using.

clam go stone：180, Nachi black go stone：181(regular number)

The clam and Nachi black go stone which are liked most by long-time Go fan.↵
During the go game people can enjoy more the feeling of nature. It is possible for beginners just enjoy the feel, the sense of quality of the clam go stone and the Nachi black go stone.

修正後
We show the high-grade natural go stones (yunzi): clam (from Mexco) go stones specially made in Hyuga (Miyazaki prefecture), and Nachi black go stones No. 25 for practical use. The No.25 refers to the thickness of a clam go stone at about 7.0 mm. On the natural clam go stone, you can enjoy beautiful lines and natural color, while the Nachi black go stone has natural deep black color.

Nachi black go stone is simply coated with oil for the quality protection. Please wipe it with a dry cloth before using.

clam go stones：180, Nachi black go stones:181 (regular number)

The clam and Nachi black go stones are most favored by long-time Go fans, letting them feel mounting appreciation for nature in the stones during a game. It is possible for uninitiated to experience and enjoy the ease of their use as well as the upscale sense of quality of the clam go stones and the Nachi black go stones.

少しの文法のエラーの校正と、英語としてもう少し自然な表現を心がけてみました。よろしくお願いします。