翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

・坐骨神経痛・中程度の脊髄狭窄症・肩関節炎・膝関節炎です。
その効果は大変素晴らしく多くの患者から支持を得ています。

最近では日本サッカー連盟もワールドカップやオリンピックで鍼灸を取り入れ、選手のケアに貢献しています。
鍼治療は、スポーツ選手の怪我治療や身体のメンテナンスに大変優れた効果が期待できると確信しております。

現在私たち家族は、ニュージーランド移住に向け、クライストチャーチでの求職活動をしています。

英語

Acupuncture treatments can help the body's internal organs of muscles with a small needle.
So my acupuncture treatments are very effective against lumbago, a hernia, a sciatic, moderate Spinal stenosis, arthritis of the shoulders and knees with a great trust in patients.

I read that Japan Football Association has recently been beginning to adopt this treatment way for the player during World Cup series and Olympics gam.

I convince that our treatments are very effective for sport player's wound and body maintenance.

Now I am arranging to move to New Zealand with my family and searching for a job at Christchurch.

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russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/01/29 18:08:29

元の翻訳
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Acupuncture treatments can help the body's internal organs of muscles with a small needle.↵
So my acupuncture treatments are very effective against lumbago, a hernia, a sciatic, moderate Spinal stenosis, arthritis of the shoulders and knees with a great trust in patients.

I read that Japan Football Association has recently been beginning to adopt this treatment way for the player during World Cup series and Olympics gam.

I convince that our treatments are very effective for sport player's wound and body maintenance.

Now I am arranging to move to New Zealand with my family and searching for a job at Christchurch.

修正後
My acupuncture treatments are very effective against sciatica, moderate spinal stenosis, and arthritis of the shoulders and knees, results kindly supported by many of my patients.

The Japan Football Association has recently begun to adopt acupuncture for the World Cup series and Olympics games, contributing to the care of players.

I am convinced that acupuncture treatments can produce great results for players' injuries and body maintenance.

I am currently arranging to move to New Zealand with my family and am searching for a job in Christchurch.

There is a large amount of additional and missing information here which I can't comprehend...