翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 日本のゲームのキャラクターの紹介文です

日本語

Kaenbyou RinはTouhou Chireidenに出てくるボスキャラクターです

彼女は火車であり、地霊殿に住んでいます

彼女はお空の親友であり、さとりのペットです

地獄の管理を行なっていたのですが、ある日お空が神奈子によって大きな力を得ました

さらに力を得たお空は地上を制圧しようと考えました

このままでいくとお空はさとり、あるいは地底の鬼に始末されてしまうのではないかと恐れました

そこで鬼やさとりにバレてしまう前に、誰かがお空を止めてくれることを願い怨霊を地上にバラ撒きました。

英語

Kaenbyou Rin is the Boss of Touhou Chireiden.
She is a Kasha, and she lives in Chireiden.
She is Oku's best friend and Satori's pet.
Rin and Oku were managing a hell. But one day, Oku got the power from Kanako.
Oku got more and more power, then she tried to manage the earth.
Rin was feared Oku may be punished by Satori or demons in the bottom of the earth.
So she scattered bad ghosts on the earth to ask somebody stop Oku before Satori and demons would realized.

レビュー ( 1 )

kazue_ishikawaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/01 16:05:06

元の翻訳
Kaenbyou Rin is the Boss of Touhou Chireiden.
She is a Kasha, and she lives in Chireiden.
She is Oku's best friend and Satori's pet.
Rin and Oku were managing a hell. But one day, Oku got the power from Kanako.
Oku got more and more power, then she tried to manage the earth.
Rin was feared Oku may be punished by Satori or demons in the bottom of the earth.
So she scattered bad ghosts on the earth to ask somebody stop Oku before Satori and demons would realized.

修正後
Kaenbyou Rin is the main character of Touhou Chireiden.
She is a Kasha, and she lives in Chireiden.
She is Oku's best friend and Satori's pet.
Rin and Oku were managing a hell. But one day, Oku got the power from Kanako.
Oku got more and more power, then she tried to manage the earth.
Rin was feared Oku may be punished by Satori or demons in the bottom of the earth.
So she scattered bad ghosts on the earth to ask somebody to stop Oku before Satori and demons would realized.

ボスキャラですが、誤解を招かないように訳出しました。