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この商品を言い値で購入させていただきたいです。「Montreal H1M1N7 Canada」に無料で配送していただけますでしょうか。（カナダドルの為替レートについて考慮する必要があります。現在おおよそ30%です。

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この商品を言い値で購入させていただきたいです。「Montreal H1M1N7 Canada」に無料で配送していただけますでしょうか。（カナダドルの為替レートについて考慮する必要があります。現在おおよそマイナス30%です。

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I haven't received the items yet. Usually, packages from United Kingdom will arrive in about 10 days at least. Do you know its tracking number? If you don't have it, I will wait until the end of this week.

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I haven't received the items yet. Usually, packages from United Kingdom will arrive in about 10 days at latest. Do you know its tracking number? If you don't have it, I will wait until the end of this week.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We've received your request to return your money in full amount, is there any problem with the product? Or, is it because you haven't received the product yet?

Of course we can return your money in full amount depending on the reason. But please let us know your reasons.

Thank you very much.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We've received your request to refund in full amount. Are there any problems with the product? Or, is it because you haven't received the product yet?

Of course we can refund in full amount depending on the reason. But please let us know the situation.

Thank you very much.

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こんにちは。あなたのレンズに興味があります。輸送ですが、低価格で送っていただけませんでしょうか？
よろしくお願いします。

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こんばんは。あなたのレンズに興味があります。発送時の出荷書類に低い金額を申告していただく事は可能ですか？
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんばんは。あなたのレンズに興味があります。出荷文章の中で一番安い物を教えてください。敬具

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こんばんは。あなたのレンズに興味があります。発送時の出荷書類に低い金額を申告していただく事は可能ですか？敬具

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Is it really Responsive? The width of Pop Up can be changed even if I adjust the width of the browser narrow.
Also it is good to display movies such like YouTube.

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Is it really Responsive? The width of Pop Up cannot be changed even if I adjust the width of the browser narrow.
Also it is good to display movies such as YouTube.

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I bought a certain product on Amazon, believing that it was one of your goods. However, the delivered item has turned out to be Chinese-made Instead of US-made, with its logo and color looking different from those in your catalogue. Do you make any of your products in China as well? Why do the logo and color look different? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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I bought a product you manufacture on Amazon. However, the delivered item has turned out to be a Chinese-made product instead of an US-made one, with its logo and color looking different from those in your catalogue. Do you make any of your products in China as well? Why do the logo and color look different? I'm looking forward to your reply.

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Hello.

Thank you for purchasing.

I was checking before shipping, and I found that there is a mistake between the explaination and the picture of my item.

I am very sorry but could you agree with the cancel request?

It have model changed and its accessory CD driver is not attached any more. (I attached the picture.)
You can download it on the internet, but I would not recommend because it is written in Japanese.

I will refund you and send you an apology gift.

Thank you and I apologize.

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Hello.

Thank you for purchasing.

I was checking the product before shipping, and I found that there are mistakes in the explaination and the picture of my item.

I am very sorry but could you agree with my cancel request?

It a model change and its accessory CD driver is not attached any more. (I attached the picture.)
You can download it on the internet, but I would not recommend because it is written in Japanese.

I will refund you and send you an apology gift.

Thank you and I apologize.

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Good day!
Thank you for purchasing.
Today I found that the explanation and picture of my item were different
while I was checking it before sending the item.
I apologize for it. Would you please agree to the cancellation?

The driver CD that is an accessory of the item is not attached due
to change of the model (I attach the picture).
You can download it from the Internet.
However, I do not recommend it to you since it is in Japanese.
We will refund you and send an item as our apology to you.
I apologize again.

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Good day!
Thank you for purchasing.
Today I found that the explanation and picture of my item were wrong
while I was checking it before sending the item.
I apologize for it. Would you please agree to the cancellation?

The driver CD that is an accessory of the item is not attached due
to change of the model (I attach the picture).
You can download it from the Internet.
However, I do not recommend it to you since it is in Japanese.
We will refund you and send an item as our apology to you.
I apologize again.

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It seems that the shipment is not moved.
The delay of updating the tracking system is observed quite often with ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS) and the movement of the shipment on the USPS website sometimes looks slower than the actual shipment.
But, it is true that this shipment is a little slower than the actual shipping speed so could you please contact to USPS?

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It seems that the shipment is not moved.
The delay of updating the tracking system is observed quite often with ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS) and the movement of the shipment on the USPS website sometimes looks slower than the actual shipment.
But, it is true that this shipment is a little slower than the actual shipping speed so could you please contact USPS?

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Indeed, it seems that the package has not transported.
In ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS), we often experience the delay of the update of the tracking system and it appears to be later than in real delivery. However, the arrival speed is actually slower than a normal arrival speed. So could you please ask to USPS?

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Indeed, it seems that the package has not transported.
In ISC LOS ANGELES CA (USPS), we often experience the delay of the update of the tracking system and it appears to be later than in real delivery. However, the arrival speed is actually slower than a normal arrival speed. So could you please ask USPS?

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My customer needed this product in this month.
If we price it down, he doesn't care even though the box damaged.

I recommended the exchange but he refused the offer. So we don't need to replace it.

However, I appreciate your corporation.

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My customer needed this product in this month.
If you could lower the price, he doesn't care even though the box is damaged.

I recommended to exchange but he refused the offer. So we don't need to replace it.

However, I appreciate your corporation so far.

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My customer needed the product during this month.
So if you lower a little bit the price, he said it is okay if the box is broken.

I recommended to exchange product but he refused so there is no need for exchange the product any more.

But I am very grateful to how you handled this until now.

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My customer needed the product during this month.
So if you lower a little bit the price, he said it is okay if the box is broken.

I recommended to exchange product but he refused so there is no need to exchange the product any more.

But I am very grateful to how you handled this matter now.

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Would you please tell me that when you will send the products to the shipping company? Also, please note that it is necessary to fill in the attached file when you use shipping company. You can see a "#" in the second line of the invoice (or document). If the company is a Japanese company, please fill in the Tax Identification Numbers there. Since we would like to have the products arrive by air within next week, please prepare the necessary documents.

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Would you please tell me when you will hand the products to the shipping company? Also, please note that it is necessary to fill in the attached file when you use a shipping company. You can see a "#" in the second line of the invoice (or document). If the company is a Japanese company, please fill in the Tax Identification Numbers there. Since we would like to have the products arrive by air within next week, please prepare the necessary documents.

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When will you be able to give the product to the shipping company? Also, I attached the documents if you use shipping company which they have to fill it in. If you use Japanese shipping company, they have to fill this document's second paragraph # (Taxpayer number). I would like to receive this product by next week' flight, so please prepare this documents. Thank you.

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When will you be able to give the product to the shipping company? Also, I attached the documents you need to fill in when using a shipping company. If you use a Japanese shipping company, you need to fill this document's second paragraph # (Taxpayer number). I would like to receive this product by next week' flights, so please prepare this documents. Thank you.

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About when could you deliver the product to the trucking company? Also we would like you to fill out the documents attached when you use the trucking company. You will need a taxpayer identification number on # item in the second line in case of a Japanese company. We would like the product to be arrived by next- week flight. Could you please make arrangements for the documents? Thank you in advance.

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About when could you deliver the product to the trucking company? Also we would like you to fill out the documents attached when you use the trucking company. You will need a taxpayer identification number on # item in the second line in case of using a Japanese company. We would like the product to be arrived by next- week flight. Could you please make arrangements for the documents? Thank you in advance.

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When can you hand over the product to the shipping company? Also, if you use a shipping company, I will attach the document that I would like you to fill in. At the second line of this document, for the element #, if it is a japanese company you will need the tax identification number. I would like the product to arrive on next week's flight, so please prepare the document.

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When can you hand over the product to the shipping company? Also, if you use a shipping company, I will attach the document that I would like you to fill in. At the second line of this document, for the element #, if it is a Japanese company you will need the tax identification number. I would like the product to arrive by next week's flights, so please prepare the document.

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Thank you for your payment. Just as you said there is no scratch or mold in the glass, there are dust came inside it. There is no effect to the photo. There is no problem regarding the operations. Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your payment. Just as you said, there is no scratches or mold in the glass, there are dusts came inside it. There is no effect to the photo. There is no problem regarding the operations. Thank you very much.

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I confirmed your payment. The glass doesn't have any scratches and mold, but there is dust contamination as you've mentioned. The contamination does not affect the shooting. No operational problems. Thank you.

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Thank you for your payment. The glass doesn't have any scratches and mold, but there is dust contamination as you've mentioned. The contamination does not affect the shooting. No operational problems. Thank you.

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今購入しました。インボイスを送ってください。
念のため確認です。ガラスは汚れておらず、少しほこりがついているだけで、AFとアパーチャーは全て良好、ということで間違いないですか？
最近eBayで購入したレンズの相当数に問題がありました。こういったことは両者にとって好ましくありません。よって支払前に明確にしたいのです。

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今購入しました。インボイスを送ってください。
念のため確認です。ガラスは汚れておらず、少しほこりがついているだけで、AFとレンズの口径は全て良好、ということで間違いないですか？
最近eBayで購入したレンズの相当数に問題がありました。こういったことは両者にとって好ましくありません。よって支払前に明確にしたいのです。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your quick response. We are also perfectly aware on the 2 types of delivery status.
It would be an easy conversation if it was a miss from our end, but the issue is what's caused the misalignment.
If you look at the following, the product delivered in January as B was apparently being counted in the delivery information of A in December.
In addition, the timing for the problem this time matches the arrival timing of B.
I think the delivery tracking number of B will become apparent if you can check on the whereabouts of c.
Can you kindly confirm the delivery status once again?

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Thank you for your quick response. We are also perfectly aware on the 2 types of delivery status.
It would be an easy conversation if it was a miss from our end, but the issue is what's caused the misalignment.
If you look at the following, the product delivered in January as B was apparently being counted in the delivery information of A in December.
In addition, the timing for the problem this time occurred matches the arrival of B.
I think the delivery tracking number of B will become apparent if you can check on the whereabouts of c.
Can you kindly confirm the delivery status once again?