yoppo (yoppo1026) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
All products did not have a chase number so far.
I put a chase number for all products and sent it out.
Also, I fixed the system which you can always see the delivery situation in the future.

In addition, I confirm a chase number and let a buyer know the detailed delivery situation when I get a contact from a buyer who don't receive the product yet.
Also, if an untraceable case occurs, I send out a new product within 48 hours.
I bear the re-delivery shipment fee in us.

修正後
All products did not have chase numbers before.
I put chase numbers for all products to be sent out.
Also, I fixed the system which you can always see the delivery situation in the future.

In addition, I'll confirm a chase number and let a buyer know the detailed delivery situation when I get a contact from a buyer who hasn't received the product yet.
Also, if an untraceable case occurs, I send out a new product within 48 hours.
I bear the re-delivery shipment fee in us.

元の翻訳
(event participation ticket with serial number) ticket holder are mention in time set as in the ticket to gather at Shibuya tower record first floor elevator.
The staff will form the line

Current day in venue from target merchandise's sale and reservation are not available

Notice of women and children's area establishment

Current events(event participation ticket with serial number)ticket holder from women and children as targeted guests. comparatively stage for anticipation are limited to women and children are being set up.

修正後
(Event participation ticket with serial number) ticket holder are mention in time set as in the ticket to gather at Shibuya tower record first floor elevator.
The staff will form the line

Current day in venue from target merchandise's sale and reservation are not available

Notice of women and children's area establishment

Current events(event participation ticket with serial number)ticket holder from women and children as targeted guests. comparatively stage for anticipation are limited to women and children are being set up.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your confirmation.

And, probably I can submit by today.

I'll be in touch with you again.

修正後
Thank you for your confirmation.

And, probably I can submit it by today.

I'll be in touch with you again.

元の翻訳
We release the latest information of our products with video, exhibited on Japan expo., on our "Internet Expo. tv"
The designer and responsible person explain the specialty and ways to use of the new products.
You can get the latest information of new products of Japan.
Including the exposition of machine, food, interior, etc.
Access to "www.tenji.tv" now!

We also supply the exposition of Japan.
Those who may be interested in import or export, please contact us.

修正後
We release the latest information of our products with video, exhibited on Japan expo., on our "Internet Expo. tv"
The designer and responsible person explain the specialty and ways to use of the new products.
You can get the latest information of new products of Japan.
It includes the exposition of machine, food, interior, etc.
Access to "www.tenji.tv" now!

We also support the exposition of Japan.
Those who may be interested in import or export, please contact us.

元の翻訳
・Install film pack correctly.
・Pull the tab straight out.

・make sure the temperature when you are proceeding.
・please follow the time about when you can strip negative part from positive part listed chart below.
You can get the best result when it's 25℃.
・For the best result, we recommend to keep it in warmer if the room temperature is below 15℃.

・We included the file regarding of temperature for procedure guide.

・don't use the film if you drop it.
・please keep your developing roller clean always.
・be careful for color temperature of light sauce.
・correct reflected color
・keep all the films cooler place below 10℃.

修正後
・Install the film pack correctly.
・Pull the tab straight out.

・make sure the temperature when you are proceeding.
・please follow the time about when you can strip negative part from positive part listed chart below.
You can get the best result when it's 25℃.
・For the best result, we recommend to keep it in warmer if the room temperature is below 15℃.

・We included the file regarding of temperature for procedure guide.

・don't use the film if you drop it.
・please keep your developing roller clean always.
・be careful for color temperature of light sauce.
・correct reflected color
・keep all the films cooler place below 10℃.

元の翻訳
I asked to DHL many times but I'm regret that the Brackets did not discover.

I only paid the price of product and charge but the product did not arrive at me, anyone can understand my empty-hearted.
You would not complain the file to DHL, so I want to resignation of MYUS's account.

How do I do?

修正後
I asked to DHL many times but I'm regret that the Brackets did not discover.

I only paid the price of the product and charge but the product did not arrive at me, anyone can understand my empty heart.
You would not complain the file to DHL, so I want to resign MYUS's account.

What should I do?

元の翻訳
this is a new order.
you have a problem on your shopping cart which in internet.
so,you can order from PayPal.

修正後
This is a new order.
You have a problem on your shopping cart on Internet.
So, I will order from PayPal.

元の翻訳
An event for the celebration of the release of a new album "Killing Me Softly" by Tokyo Women's Style: A mini live & a meeting for handshake

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An event for the celebration of the release of a new album "Killing Me Softly" by TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE: A mini live & a meeting for handshake

元の翻訳
・Must we remit and address the revenue to an Indian corporate bank account?
Can the remittance of the revenue be addressed to any German, American or Japanese bank accounts?
・Can the remittance be addressed to an individual bank accounts?
・Can an individual who lives in Japan opens an account?

修正後
・Must we remit and address the revenue to an Indian corporate bank account?
Can the remittance of the revenue be addressed to any German, American or Japanese bank accounts?
・Can the remittance be addressed to an individual bank account?
・Can an individual who lives in Japan open an account?

元の翻訳
Thank you for reply.
I am interested in all of your products, I would like to handle the bag at first.

I have been doing small buiness and do not hold many funds,
I think I will purchase a bag of about four and expand to Japan first.
In Japan, characteristic products are easy to boom, but It will end without having to fix the market.
I have seen that kind of product many times until now.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
I am interested in all of your products, I would like to handle bags at first.

I am still doing a small buiness and do not hold many funds,
so I think I will purchase a bag of about four and expand to Japan first.
In Japan, characteristic products are easy to boom, but It will end without taking their roots in the market.
I have seen those kinds of products many times until now.

元の翻訳
もう一人の重要メンバーであるKenji Endo氏は2010年に加わった。彼とDaisuke氏の最初の出会いは大学時代で、その後、Kenji氏がCTOであり、共同創設者であるGaiaXという会社でDaisuke氏がインターンだった頃に再会した。GaiaXが売りに出されると知り、Daisuke氏はKenji氏を説得してPixtaに加わってもらった。

振り返れば、Daisuke氏の過去の経験と失敗はPixta進展のために大きく焼くに立った。「もし、コーヒー豆のeコマースでなく、婦人用衣類事業からスタートしていたら　きっとPixtaの案は出てこなかったと思います。」とDaisuke氏は語る。

修正後
もう一人の重要メンバーであるKenji Endo氏は2010年に加わった。彼とDaisuke氏の最初の出会いは大学時代で、その後、Kenji氏がCTOであり、共同創設者であるGaiaXという会社でDaisuke氏がインターンだった頃に再会した。GaiaXが売りに出されると知り、Daisuke氏はKenji氏を説得してPixtaに加わってもらった。

振り返れば、Daisuke氏の過去の経験と失敗はPixta進展のために大きく役に立った。「もし、コーヒー豆のeコマースでなく、婦人用衣類事業からスタートしていたら　きっとPixtaの案は出てこなかったと思います。」とDaisuke氏は語る。