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2014 U-KISS JAPAN LIVE TOUR - Memories - RETURNS in BUDOKAN

The final additional performance of 2014 U-KISS JAPAN LIVE TOUR - Memories
have been decided !!!
The place is "Nihon Budoukan" !!!!!

<Ticket information＞
Ticket price: All seat reserved; 800 yen (with CD)
* Ticket necessary for 3 years old or more, No one under 3 years old admitted
*CD: provided in the hall on the day of the performance
*Notice: there is not the appearance of AJ

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2014 U-KISS JAPAN LIVE TOUR - Memories - RETURNS in BUDOKAN

The final additional performance of 2014 U-KISS JAPAN LIVE TOUR - Memories
have been decided !!!
The place is "Nippon Budoukan" !!!!!

<Ticket information＞
Ticket price: All seat reserved; 800 yen (with CD)
* Ticket necessary for 3 years old or more, No one under 3 years old admitted
*CD: provided in the hall on the day of the performance
*Notice: there is not the appearance of AJ

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August 2008, since accomplishing debut in the title song 「Not a kid」 of the mini album 『N-Generation』, and the title song 「Love you」in the second mini album 『Bring It Back 2 Old School』 was published, became attracting attention because of the image of "Lovely brother".

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August 2008, since accomplishing debut in the title song "Not a kid" of the mini album 'N-Generation', and the title song "Love you" in the second mini album 'Bring It Back 2 Old School' was published, became attracting attention because of the image of "Lovely brother".

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Thank you for checking the quantity of storage.
Please ship those 5 merchandises to Yamato Transport co., ltd together with the goods I'll order tomorrow.

Thank you for sending me an invoice.
I already paid for July already.
For August payment, I'll pay at the end of this month as scheduled.

And more, the catalogue hasn't been sent yet.
Please send it together with the next shipment.

About "Light green", could you ship those following ordered?
Or coudn't you ship all those too?
Please check the condition and give me a response.

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Thank you for checking the quantity of storage.
Please ship those 5 merchandises to Yamato Transport co., ltd together with the goods I'll order tomorrow.

Thank you for sending me an invoice.
I already paid for July.
For August payment, I'll pay at the end of this month as scheduled.

And more, the catalogue hasn't been sent yet.
Please send it together with the next shipment.

About "Light green", could you ship those following ordered?
Or coudn't you ship all those too?
Please check the condition and give me a response.

元の翻訳
The recommended spot in Japan

[Historic Villages of Shirakawa-go]

There is the Historic Villages of Shirakawa-go located in Gifu that foreign people can experience what they want to do the most.
This place was resistered on the World Heritage List.

Especially it's very popular for foreign tourists to stay guest house in Shirakawa-go.

There are three reasons.

Seeing Japanese countryside
Coming in contact with local people
Experiencing of the Japanese traditional life

This is a reccomended spot that you can enjoy the sense of slipping back in time to Japan in good old days.

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The recommended spot in Japan

[Historic Villages of Shirakawa-go]

There is the Historic Villages of Shirakawa-go located in Gifu that foreign people can experience what they want to do the most.
This place was resistered on the World Heritage List.

Especially it's very popular among foreign tourists to stay guest house in Shirakawa-go.

There are three reasons.

Seeing Japanese countryside
Coming in contact with local people
Experiencing of the Japanese traditional life

This is a reccomended spot that you can enjoy the sense of slipping back in time to Japan in good old days.

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One of the recommended places in Japan

Thached houses in Shirakawa village

Here you can find a place peope from abroad would most satisfy with staying in Japan which located in Gifu prefecture, Shirakawa village with thached houses.

Shirakawa village ,especially the experienae in the thached guest house is very poplar for the foreign tourists.

There are three reasons for it.
1 You can see the countryside of this country.
2 You can communicate with the people in the countryside.
3 You can experienae the tradisional life of this country.

You will surely experience a timetravel to the old good era of Japan, so this place is highly recommended.

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One of the recommended places in Japan

Thached houses in Shirakawa village

Here you can find a place peope from abroad would most satisfy with staying in Japan which located in Gifu prefecture, Shirakawa village with thached houses.

Shirakawa village ,especially the experienae in the thached guest house is very poplar among the foreign tourists.

There are three reasons for it.
1 You can see the countryside of this country.
2 You can communicate with the people in the countryside.
3 You can experienae the tradisional life of this country.

You will surely experience a timetravel to the old good era of Japan, so this place is highly recommended.

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Recommended spot in Japan

GASSHŌ-ZUKURI OF SHIRAKAWA-GŌ
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A place for foreigners who greatly wish to experience Japan, it is located in Gifu Prefecture: the Historic Villages of Shirakawa-gō.
This place has been registered on the World Heritage List in 1995.

The guest house experience "gasshō-zukuri" of Shirakawa-gō is extremely popular among foreign tourists.

There are 3 reasons for that:

・You get to see the Japanese countryside
・You get to mingle with the local people
・You get to experience the traditional Japanese lifestyle.

It is a spot recommended to get a feel as if you fall into a time slip to Japan's good old days.

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Recommended spot in Japan

GASSHŌ-ZUKURI OF SHIRAKAWA-GŌ
A place for foreigners who greatly wish to experience Japan, it is located in Gifu Prefecture: the Historic Villages of Shirakawa-gō.
This place has been registered on the World Heritage List in 1995.

The guest house experience "gasshō-zukuri" of Shirakawa-gō is extremely popular among foreign tourists.

There are 3 reasons for that:

・You get to see the Japanese countryside
・You get to mingle with the local people
・You get to experience the traditional Japanese lifestyle.

It is a spot recommended to get a feel as if you fall into a time slip to Japan's good old days.

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Thank you for your sincere correspondence as introducing other goods.
However, for me now, it is too much expense to pay more $50.
Thank you very much for your invitation, but I reserve purchasing the goods that you introduced me.

I will return wrong sized goods that have arrived yesterday. Would you refund the payment to me?
The business was not established, but I would like to express my gratitude to you for your honest and polite correspondence.

In returning the goods, could I choose any method of dispatch?
I keep my status in the stop payment until the returning will complete, just in case. Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your sincere correspondence as introducing other goods.
However, for me now, it is too much expense to pay additional $50.
Thank you very much for your invitation, but I reserve purchasing the goods that you introduced me.

I will return wrong sized goods that have arrived yesterday. Would you refund the payment to me?
The business was not established, but I would like to express my gratitude to you for your honest and polite correspondence.

In returning the goods, could I choose any method of dispatch?
I keep my payment suspended until the returning will complete, just in case. Thank you for your understanding.

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Being much obliged.

We are sorry that there is a problem in photograph.
Although we can interact if you return goods after 14th, sorry for trouble you, but it would be appreciated if you can return as soon as possible.

After the product reached us, we will refund you via PayPal.

We are sorry for troubling you.

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Being much obliged.

We are sorry that there is a problem in photograph.
Although we can interact if you return goods after 14th, sorry for trouble you, but it would be appreciated if you can return as soon as possible.

After the product reaches us, we will refund you via PayPal.

We are sorry for troubling you.

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Let's learn how to play, explore and discover in the mountains.

The instructor will teaching how to do things like navigation and the correct way to wear a helmet.

Let's explore the richness of nature in the mountains, while heeding the rules and safely enjoying MTB.

The instructors will be doing maintenance for MTB one-to-one.

You can experience watching Houtou made from scratch before eating it and savouring the taste of history and culture in this region.

It is said that the origin of 'Houtou' came from the sound of rolling kneaded flour into long strips for udon during the Heian period.

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Let's learn how to play, explore and discover in the mountains.

The instructor will teach you how to do things like navigation and the correct way to wear a helmet.

Let's explore the richness of nature in the mountains, while heeding the rules and safely enjoying MTB.

The instructors will be doing maintenance for MTB one-to-one.

You can experience watching Houtou made from scratch before eating it and savouring the taste of history and culture in this region.

It is said that the origin of 'Houtou' came from the sound of rolling kneaded flour into long strips for udon during the Heian period.

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When the summer is coming every year, I think why I am going on running instead of very hot .

The reason why I don't stop running in the summer every year without off-day, it may be there is a thinking of "What a waste!" in my mind.

I am afraid that my habit of running will stop. In another word, I think it is a waste. My muscle power of legs might be weaker, and function of heart too. And my weight may rebound in spite of my hard practice. It is a very waste!

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When the summer is coming every year, I think why I am going on running in this hot weather.

The reason why I don't stop running in the summer every year without off-day, it may be there is a thinking of "What a waste!" in my mind.

I am afraid that my habit of running will stop. Or rather I think it is a waste. My muscle power of legs might be weaker, and function of heart too. And my weight may rebound in spite of my hard practice. It is a very waste!

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これは、Bの設定で開けてください、だけ他のすべての設定で1つの速度で起動します.

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これは、Bの設定では開いたままですが、他のすべての設定では1つの速度で起動します.

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Sorry for sending you so many emails.

The URL address provided yesterday did not return any search results when I tried entering the address into the search bar.
The sub folder path name could be wrong. I would really appreciate it if you could let me know the correct file name.

The FTP details are as previously provided.

Apologies for any inconvenience caused.
Thank you

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Sorry for sending you so many emails.

The URL address provided yesterday did not return any search results when I tried entering the address into the search bar.
The sub folder path name could be wrong. I would really appreciate it if you could let me know the correct file name.

The FTP details are as previously provided.

Apologies for any inconvenience caused. Your reply will be helpful.
Thank you

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Eastern part of Shizuoka Prefecture Convention Bureau, issued an unique venue PR guide booklet in English recently. In addition to the outline of the facility, it covered necessary information when events are held such as the types of the corresponding events, fees, occupancy, food & beverages and equipment. It will likely to be a powerful tool to appeal overseas MICE (Meeting, Incentive, Convention, Exhibition) planners.

In the guide booklet, it introduced six unique venues such as cycle sports center "Izu Velodrome",circuit "Fuji International Speedway" and Numazu Goyotei and 6 excursions plus Plaza Verde as a one-stop MICE facility.

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Eastern part of Shizuoka Prefecture Convention Bureau, issued an unique venue PR guide booklet in English recently. In addition to the outline of the facility, it covered necessary information when events are held such as the types of the corresponding events, fees, occupancy, food & beverages and equipment. It is likely to be a powerful tool to appeal overseas MICE (Meeting, Incentive, Convention, Exhibition) planners.

In the guide booklet, it introduced six unique venues such as cycle sports center "Izu Velodrome",circuit "Fuji International Speedway" and Numazu Goyotei and 6 excursions plus Plaza Verde as a one-stop MICE facility.

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Recoating
Top lid and bottom lid, the hoisting lever and knob are recoated later.
Black portion of the back cover is the original black.
No damage on the covering leather. It is still beautiful.
the malt at the hinge area of the back cover was changed.
It is still in the good appearance by overall.

Shutter from 1 sec until 1/500, in practical use, I Think it is at no problem level and separated.
Filter : There is the bald spot from the coating at the eyepieces area but it doesn't have the effect on visual.
it is not the corrosion of prism and very outstanding beautiful finder.
No problem about the hoisting and rewinding.

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Recoating
Top lid and bottom lid, the hoisting lever and knob were recoated later.
Black portion of the back cover is the original black.
There is no damage on the covering leather. It is still beautiful.
The malt at the hinge area of the back cover was changed.
It is still in the good appearance by overall.

Shutter from 1 sec until 1/500, in practical use, I Think it is at no problem level and separated.
Filter : There is the bald spot from the coating at the eyepieces area but it doesn't have the effect on visual.
it is not the corrosion of prism and very outstanding beautiful finder.
There is no problem about the hoisting and rewinding.