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10年弱前 男性 30代
日本
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[削除済みユーザ] この翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語
2014/12/15 06:45:11

元の翻訳
I can't be seen yet what you recommended ～ movie.　I would like to see it within this year.
Just days ago, I went to travel to Taiwan. It is my first solo trip.
I want to go to Thailand or Shanghai sometime soon by one self.
First get more experience, after then I want to go to the more far country.

Of course i want to go to your country. But travel expense is expensive. I think more than 3000 dollars.
First, I necessary to save money and Study Spanish very well for the day.

By the way, How's your studying Japanese?

修正後
I can't be seen yet what you recommended ～ movie [what does this mean?].　I would like to watch it within this year.
Just days ago, I went to travel to Taiwan. It is my first solo trip.
I want to go to Thailand or Shanghai sometime soon by one self [one self?].
First [subject missing] get more experience, after then I want to go to the [article] more far [comparative] country.

Of course I want to go to your country. But travel expense is expensive [unnatural]. I think it costs more than 3,000 dollars.
First, I necessary [parts of speech confusion] to save money and study Spanish very well for the day [awkward?].

By the way, How's your studying Japanese?