teddyandsteddy (teddyandsteddy) — もらったレビュー

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I asked the customer about SLDR 460 8 degree, but may not be so popular in Japan.
I am sorry to cause you trouble, but not this time.
I hope you understand.

I expect your call next Tuesday.
If the price matches I buy from you.

I will dispatch Jetspeed via EMS tomorrow.
The traching number is.

Would you refund us after checking it?

Would you tell me if you know Tourlussue' s HOT, which is low loft (6-8 degree) driver one.
Japanese customers are looking for them.

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I asked the customer about the SLDR 460 8 degree, but may not be so popular in Japan.
I am sorry to cause you trouble, but not this time.
I hope you understand.

I expect your call next Tuesday.
If the price matches I buy [沢山?] from you.

I will dispatch the JetSpeed via EMS tomorrow.
The traching [spelling] number is.

Would you refund us after checking it [?]?

Would you tell me if you know Tourlussue' s [spelling] HOT, which is low loft (6-8 degree) driver one?
Japanese customers are looking for them.

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私は来週火曜日にTour Issue社の製品を取りに行きます。
私は今回は白いＳＬＤＲ’Ｓは全く入手しないのですが、おそらく将来的には手に入れるでしょう。
お客様は、御覧のようなscrew toeの黒いＳＬＤＲに興味はございますか？
もし、興味がございましたら、あと10点在庫がございます。多くの顧客から問い合わせを受けております。
もし、購入なさりたいようでしたら、他の顧客が入手する前にPayPal納品書を送付いたします。

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私は来週火曜日にTour Issue社の製品を取りに行きます。
私は今回は白いＳＬＤＲ’Ｓの入荷はしないのですが、おそらく将来的には入荷するでしょう。
お客様は、御覧のようなscrew toeの黒いＳＬＤＲに興味はございますか？
もし、興味がございましたら、あと10点在庫がございます。多くの顧客から問い合わせを受けております。
もし、購入なさりたいようでしたら、他の顧客が入手する前にPayPalインボイス(請求書)を送付いたします。

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When will it be the responsive update? Do you really pay attention to handle this issue?
It has been seven months from the last update.
I also think that to delete critical messages losen your company's reputation. It is natural that users got angry.

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When will it be the responsive update [awkward]? Do you really pay attention to handle this issue [ungrammatical]?
It has been already seven months since the last update.
I also think that deleting critical messages losen [spelling] your company's reputation. It is natural that users get angry.

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私どもはこれがどれ程お客様の気分を害するか、存じております。お客様が注文に対する補完またはさらなる情報を求めるのは当然のことだと考えております。どうぞお気軽にご連絡ください。

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私どもはこれがどれ程お客様の気分を害するか、存じております。お客様が注文に対する補完またはさらなる情報が必要なら、どうぞお気軽にご連絡ください。

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In case independence of Scottland passes, it may cause any reaction toward each Western Eurpoian independence movements including Spain, which has been sealed after the Second World War.

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In case independence of Scotland passes, it may cause a kind of reaction toward every Western European independence movements including Spain, which has been sealed after the Second World War.

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I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

After checking your payment, I sent the item by EMS as soon as possible, but it seems that it was stuck in custom. Though I cannot figure out the reason, it is stopped. It depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is usual problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive

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I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

I sent the item via EMS as soon as I confirmed your payment, but it seems that it is stuck at the customs. Though I cannot figure out the reason, sometimes items are stuck at the customs without specific reasons. It is said that it often depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is unavoidable problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive

元の翻訳
I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

After checking your payment, I sent the item by EMS as soon as possible, but it seems that it was stuck in custom. Though I cannot figure out the reason, it is stopped. It depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is usual problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive

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I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

After checking your payment, I sent the item by EMS as soon as possible, but it seems that it was stuck in custom. Though I cannot figure out the reason, it is stopped. It depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is usual problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive.