Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Shall I prepare two copies of the agreement and mail it to you with a sign?
Please return one copy to me after you sign.
If this works, kindly let me know your mailling address.

By the way, is there any way you could minimize the size of SQADRA?
According to the homepage it says the size is at 58x33x30cm, but I would prefer it to be at 45 cm X 33 cm X 20 cm (this is a rough estimate).
If this is available for creation, kindly advise the price.

修正後
Shall I prepare two copies of the agreement and mail it to you with a sign?
Please return one copy to me after you sign.
If this works, kindly let me know your mailling address.

By the way, is there any way you could minimize the size of SQADRA?
According to the homepage, it says the size is at 58x33x30cm, but I would prefer it to be at 45 cm X 33 cm X 20 cm (this is a rough estimate).
If this is available for creation, kindly advise the price.

元の翻訳
IPカメラの保障期間は1年間です。
通常の使用状態において、もし商品のハードウェアの不具合がバグなどにより発生した場合、当方で無料修理サービスを行います。
もし不具合と破損（負荷の限界を超えた場合を含む）が誤ったインストール、操作、作業環境の準備を怠ったあるいは人為的な災難
により発生した場合、有料となります。

カメラが現状の特定事由がわからないため、発生費用が発生するかどうか判断ができません。
ネットワークモジュールが破損している場合は、当方で無料勝利を行います。

送料につきまして、返送時の費用はお客様負担となります。
修理後は弊社送料負担で商品を返送いたします。

修正後
IPカメラの保障期間は1年間です。
通常の使用状態において、もし商品のハードウェアの不具合がバグなどにより発生した場合、当方で無料修理サービスを行います。
もし不具合と破損（負荷の限界を超えた場合を含む）が誤ったインストール、操作、作業環境の準備を怠ったあるいは人為的な災難
により発生した場合、有料となります。

現状、お客様のカメラの事由がわからないため、費用が発生するかどうか判断ができません。
ネットワークモジュールが破損している場合は、当方で無料修理を行います。

送料につきまして、返送時の費用はお客様負担となります。
修理後は弊社送料負担で商品を返送いたします。

元の翻訳
アダプターの本体は全く別のものです。

修正後
アダプターの本体は全く別のものです。(商品の違いに関する説明なので、全く違う種類のアダプターです、みたいないみでしょうか？）

元の翻訳
Since we use an old database, we would probably have to upgrade the database.
We have, however, uploaded aaa.sql file. You should be able to confirm the status by logging in with the FTP information I have notified to you. It may still show the button for upgrade even after logging in the administrator's screen though.

You might also receive the same question. I believe this is a bug that hinders upgrading from the old version and new installation.

修正後
Since we use an old database, we would probably have to upgrade the database.
We have, however, uploaded aaa.sql file. You should be able to confirm the status by logging in with the FTP information I have notified to you. It doesn't show the button for upgrade even after logging in the administrator's screen though.

You might also receive the same question. I believe this is a bug that hinders upgrading from the old version and new installation.

元の翻訳
Please accept our sincere apologies for having shipped the wrong item to you. We are sorry to bother you, but would you please discard the item upon receipt at your end? Please also know that the item of your item is no longer available for shipment. As a sign of our apologies, we will issue you a full refund with additional GBP10.00 compensation. The refund may take several days to be deposited into your account. It is truly our regret that we could not delivery your order to you. Nonetheless, thank you very much for having visited to our store.

修正後
Please accept our sincere apologies for having shipped the wrong item to you. We are sorry to bother you, but would you please discard the item upon receipt at your end? Please also know that the item of your item is no longer available for shipment. As a sign of our apologies, we will issue you a full refund with additional GBP10.00 compensation. The refund may take several days to be deposited into your account. It is truly our regret that we could not delivery your order to you. Nonetheless, thank you very much for having visited our store.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
Noted.
We will re-ship your item.
Please give it 5 to 10 days before arrival.
Your tracking number will be notified later.
Thank you for your understanding.
We apologize the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.

This item is sold based upon the customer's consent.
Since the shipping fee and item price are agreed by you for purchase, we are afraid but we cannot accept a refund request unless otherwise there is a malfunction found with the item.

修正後
Thank you for the message.
Noted.
We will re-ship your item.
Please give it 5 to 10 days before arrival.
Your tracking number will be notified later.
Thank you for your understanding.
We apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.

This item is sold based upon the customer's consent.
Since the shipping fee and item price are agreed by you for purchase, we are afraid but we cannot accept a refund request unless otherwise there is a malfunction found with the item.

元の翻訳
調査の結果わかったことは、御社が購入者に注文商品の配送予定ついてメール送信しようとしたところ、「メッセージ未受信：受取人のメールアドレスは無効です」というエラーメッセージを受け取ったということです。

ご承知いただきたいのは、このエラーメッセージを受け取るということは、購入者が本人のアカウントにアクセスすればこれらのメッセージを確認できる状態にあるが、彼らの受信ボックスでは受け取りませんという意味です。

しかしながら、次善策として購入者に既に告知している「(607) 584-4164 」電話番号を使用して彼らに連絡を取ることをお勧めします。

修正後
調査の結果わかったことは、御社が購入者に注文商品の配送予定ついてメール送信しようとしたところ、「メッセージ未受信：受取人のメールアドレスは無効です」というエラーメッセージを受け取ったということです。

ご承知いただきたいのは、このエラーメッセージを受け取るということは、購入者が本人のアカウントにアクセスすればこれらのメッセージを確認できる状態にあるが、彼らの受信ボックスでは受け取りませんという意味です。

しかしながら、次善策として購入者が既に提供している「(607) 584-4164 」電話番号を使用して彼らに連絡を取ることをお勧めします。

元の翻訳
As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broaden my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.

修正後
As I have lived in Japan, I think this 1-year opportunity to spend as an exchange student at University of Sydney in a student residence will bring me quality interactions with people from various values and backgrounds that I have never met before. As my future career interest includes the resolution of the global issues such as poverty and child labour, I very much value the significance of broadening my horizons by communicating with people with various sense of values in Australia. The life at a student residency will help me expose to the in-depth interactions with many more people than living off campus, as well as the diversified sense of values.