Tearz (tearz) — もらったレビュー

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Thanks for the wonderful offer. I have been debating to purchase those items but only few days ago was my PayPal account was put on restriction for going through the screening process. According to the person in charge of the PayPal screening, it is because I have withdrawn a large amount of fund recently. It appears to be taking a few days to get it completed. Would you please wait till the begining of August until my PayPal accont becomes available again for remittence?

Thank you for your kind understanding.

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Thanks for the wonderful offer. I have been debating to purchase those items but only few days ago my PayPal account was put on restriction for going through the screening process. According to the person in charge of the PayPal screening, it is because I made a transaction with a large amount of fund recently. It appears to be taking a few days to get it completed. Would you please wait till the beginning of August until my PayPal account becomes available again for remittence?

Thank you for your kind understanding.

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「音楽の街」だと認識している御茶ノ水への日帰り旅行も含め、その地域にある素晴らしいものなら何でも取り入れようと思っています。

今地図などを眺めながら旅程を決めているところです。

あなたのご都合があうようでしたら、東京でお会いできると大変嬉しいです。ご一緒にお酒でも酌み交わしましょう！
日程が近づいてきたら改めて詳細について決めましょう。

仕事の話に戻りますが、個人的にはベージュのケースが気に入っています。とても素敵です。
今すぐ保証を使う必要に迫られているかといえばそうではないと思うのですが、それに必要な六角レンチがこちらにあると思います。ケースと共にそれら両方をお送りしますのでご心配なく。

SAGOを受け取るのを心待ちにしております。東京にいけることにはそれ以上に興奮しております。

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「音楽の街」だと認識している御茶ノ水への日帰り旅行も含め、その地域にある素晴らしいものなら何でも取り入れようと思っています。

今地図などを眺めながら旅程を決めているところです。

あなたのご都合があうようでしたら、東京でお会いできると大変嬉しいです。ご一緒にお酒でも酌み交わしましょう！
日程が近づいてきたら改めて詳細について決めましょう。

仕事の話に戻りますが、個人的にはベージュのケースが気に入っています。とても素敵です。
今すぐ保証を使う必要に迫られているかといえばそうではないと思うのですが、それに、必要な場合、使える六角レンチは、こちらにあると思います。ケースと一緒にそれら両方を送ろうとなさっているなら、ご心配なく。

SAGOを受け取るのを心待ちにしております。東京にいけることにはそれ以上に興奮しております。

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Regarding the mobile version:

When sharing a post over Twitter, is there any way you could set it to fill out the title name and url automoatically?
At the moment, a blank window opens with nothing in it.
Do you set it so on purpose?
If it is due to the bug, could you please let me know the replacing code? It would be great if you could attach the replacing PHP file, too. But if it is not due to the bug issue, you could leave it as is.

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Regarding the mobile version:

When sharing a post over Twitter, is there any way you could set it to fill out the title name and url automoatically?
At the moment, a blank window opens with nothing in it.
Do you set it so on purpose?
If it is due to the bug, could you please let me know the replacing code? It would be great if you could attach the replacing PHP file, too. But if it is not the bug issue, you could leave it as is.

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PayPal informed me the failure of deposit from the e-check to my PayPal account.
If you would settle the payment with your credit card, instead of e-check, the deposit will be made right away. How would you like to proceed with the transaction? Please let us know if you still wish to purchase the item. Just for your information, I will be on summer recess between 8/1- 8/18. During the period I willl not be able to respond to your inquiries.

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PayPal informed me the failure of deposit made via e-check to my PayPal account.
If you settle the payment with your credit card, instead of e-check, the deposit will be made right away. How would you like to proceed with the transaction? Please let us know if you still wish to purchase the item. Just for your information, I will be on summer recess between 8/1- 8/18. During the period I will not be able to respond to your inquiries.

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Daughter: What has brought you here, you old beldam?
Woman: Oh, what a greeting. Who do you think would? My broghter brought me here.
Her older brother: Well, we had no choice...!
Woman: Kids talk is full of gibberish, I can't stand it without drinking.
Daughter: OMG poor thing you bi*ch, your brain is so empty like a bell pepper.
Woman: Shut your hole up you bloody kid. What makes you think you wouldn't be one of them? Come up with better lines if you really wanna piss me off!
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That's right!
My grandmother gave me the poem... and I haven't told anyone about it!
I have relocated as being said so.

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Daughter: What has brought you here, you old beldam?
Woman: Oh, what a greeting. Who do you think is willing to come here? Your brother dragged me here.
Her older brother: Well, we had no choice...!
Woman: I don't want kids talking. I can't stand it without drinking.
Daughter: You haven't changed a bit, you old hag. Your brain is empty like a bell pepper.
Woman: Shut your hole up you bloody kid. You think you wouldn't be a hag yourself? Come up with better lines if you really wanna piss me off!
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That's right!
My grandmother gave me the poem... and I haven't told anyone about it!
I have relocated as you said.

元の翻訳
ニューヨークは不夜城と呼ばれ、永遠に変遷を遂げる街であり、人々は常に何かしら動いている。新しく建ち続ける建物現場よりも親しみのある場所がこの街にあるとすれば、それは取り壊されようとしている古い建物の壮観だ。数ブロックも歩かないうちに、建物を取り壊すために従事している解体業者とばったり出会うことはよくあるし、このように洗練された街であるにもかかわらずそんな光景が見られるというのは不思議なほど原始的である。解体作業員はかぎつめやレーク、杭打ち機、あるいは巨大な鉄球を用いて建物をことごとく破壊する。

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ニューヨークは不夜城と呼ばれ、永遠に変遷を遂げる街であり、人々は常に何かしら動いている。新しく建ち続ける建物現場よりも親しみのある場所がこの街にあるとすれば、それは取り壊されようとしている古い建物の壮観だ。数ブロックも歩かないうちに、建物を取り壊すために従事している、破壊のための道具を手にした解体業者とばったり出会うことはよくあるが、その道具は、このように洗練された街であるにもかかわらず、不思議なほど原始的である。解体作業員はかぎつめやレーク、杭打ち機、あるいは巨大な鉄球を用いて建物をことごとく破壊する。

元の翻訳
Click the below url for more details:
http://www.his-j.com/kanto/corp/group/event/cheekyparade/

Date: October 9th, 2014 through October 13th, 2014 (3 nights and 5 days)
Departing Airport: Narita Airport
Flight Company: either JAL, ANA, Delta, or United (economy ticket with unfixed seat number)
Hotel: Pensilvania, Wolcott, Hotel Deauville, Latham, or Days Inn Hotel New York City - Broadway (hotel/room preference not acceptable)
Number of nights: cannot be shortened/extended

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Click the below url for more details:
http://www.his-j.com/kanto/corp/group/event/cheekyparade/

Date: October 9th, 2014 through October 13th, 2014 (3 nights and 5 days)
Departing Airport: Narita Airport
Flight Company: either JAL, ANA, Delta, or United Airlines (economy ticket with unfixed seat number)
Hotel: Pennsylvania, Wolcott, Hotel Deauville, Latham, or Days Inn Hotel New York City - Broadway (hotel/room preference not acceptable)
Number of nights: cannot be shortened/extended