Setsuko (setsuko) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
We deeply appreciate your effort to make the documents.
However, we declined the application for selling goods.
The reason is that it did not fulfill the requirements and we cannot disclosure the the standards, contents, and the results of the judgement. (The invoice is the minimum necessary document.)

Although the payment is already finished, we are asking that if you could cancel the dealing this time? We apologize for the inconvenience.

Although the result this time is disappointed, we would still like to purchase products from you next time. We are looking forward to continuing business with you in the future.↵

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We deeply appreciate your effort to make the documents.
However, we declined the application for selling goods.
The reason is that it did not fulfill the requirements and we cannot disclosure the the standards, contents, and the results of the judgement. (The invoice is the minimum necessary document.)

Although the payment is already finished, we are asking that if you could cancel the dealing this time? We apologize for the inconvenience.

Although the result this time is disappointed, we would still like to purchase products from you next time. We are looking forward to continuing business with you in the future.

元の翻訳
Please deliver the items from warehouse to delivery company urgently.
Could you please talk about the expense that is required additionally with the delivery company?
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The delivery company decided time and date of accepting the items from staff of the warehouse, and then went to the warehouse today.
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I assume that the staff of the warehouse contacted the delivery company after confirming the time and date of accepting them to you.
The ratio of volume that we ordered is 60 percent for clothes and 40 percent for shoes.
If we cannot order by this ratio, we will cancel it.

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Please hand over the items from warehouse to the delivery company as soon as possible.
Could you also please discuss on the expense with the delivery company ?
The delivery company went to the warehouse after fixing the date to collect items from the warehouse staff.
I assume that the warehouse staff contacted the delivery company after confirming the time and date with you.
The proportions of the order volume would be 60 percent for clothes and 40 percent for shoes.
If we cannot order in this proportions, we will cancel the whole order.

元の翻訳
I have a question about espadrille size.
I am looking for a 24.5cm one.Is it equivalent to US9?　
Please give me a correspondence table of the size of the cm and US size of espadrille.
Please answer as soon as possible.

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I have an inquiry about the size of espadrille.
I am looking for size 24.5cm. Is it equivalent to US size 9?　
If possible, please provide me the size comparison chart between centimetres and US size of the espadrille that you sell.
I'm looking forward to your prompt reply.

元の翻訳
Hello! How are you? And how are your children?
I apologize that I have not contacted you.
I was injured and had been in the hospital.
Could you help me in the work again?
If you can, please let me know. I will be waiting for it.
First you set information of 40 pieces of item by Excel file in drop box.
Then I set a file that I condsidered to be necessary in the box.
Please upload information of this item by 5 pieces at commerce.
The followings are your login ID and password.

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Hello, how are you? How are your children?
I apologize that I have not contacted you.
I was injured and had been in the hospital.
Could you please help me with my business again?
If you can, please let me know. I will be waiting for it.
I have put an Excel file that contains 40 item information in Dropbox.
I also put another file that I considered to be necessary in the box.
Please make sure to upload the item information by five to commerce.
The followings are your log in ID and password.

元の翻訳
Sorry for the delayed reply.

Thank you for the invoice.
I have a question, I thought the wholesale price was 30% off from the retail price minus VAT, was it wrong?

I have not receive the products. I will contact with you when they arrive.

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I apologize for the delayed reply.

Thank you for the invoice.
I have a question. I thought the wholesale price was 30% off from the retail price minus VAT, was it wrong?

Since I have not received the products. I will get in touch with you when they arrive.