Setsuko (setsuko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
This is the first photo book of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu, who is not only an great entertainer and musician but also a fashion icon for Harajuku-style magazines and fashion scenes. Her mysterious life style is now revealed with unseen private photos, childhood photos and talks of her family and friends. The book is full of Kyary's private wardrobe, makeup methods and treasured photos.

修正後
This is the first photo book of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu, who is not only a great entertainer and musician but also a fashion icon for Harajuku-style magazines and fashion scenes. Her mysterious life style is now revealed with private photos, childhood photos and lives with her family and friends. The book is full of photos of clothes and hair style of Kyary style fashion and her treasured photos.

元の翻訳
Hi, it has been long.
It's Hideo, a buyer in Japan.

The email address "kurihide5062@80.fm" that I had been using since two month ago is not available anymore, so please send me information about sales at kurihide5062@ac.auone-net.jp from now on.

I would like to continue business with you.
I'm looking forward to hear from you

修正後
Hi, it has been a while.
It's Hideo, the buyer from Japan.

The email address "kurihide5062@80.fm" that I had been using since two month ago is not available anymore, so would you please send me information about sales at kurihide5062@ac.auone-net.jp from now on?

I would like to continue to do business with you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you