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元の翻訳
こんにちは。＊＊＊を再び購入したいのですが、現在在庫はありますでしょうか。よろしくお願いいたします。

私はペイパルによって二つ持っている。　　私は友人を使うことはできる。
あなたは再びどのような状況になりますか？
おそらく私は旅行で通過するでしょう。

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こんにちは。＊＊＊を再び購入したいのですが、現在在庫はありますでしょうか。よろしくお願いいたします。

私はペイパルによって二つ持っている。　　私は友人を使うことはできる。
あなたはどの州にいるのかもう一度教えてもらえませんか？
おそらく私は旅行で通過するでしょう。

元の翻訳
Won't you have any relation with ABC company from now on?

If you keep the same quality and the price, we will continue to have dealings with you because you are a good collaborator since many years.

It is difficult to increase purchase amount more than before, but we want to continue to sell these products.

This is another subject.

We confirmes the invoice.
The adress that inform you of it is correcte.

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Won't you have any relation with ABC company from now on?

If you keep the same quality and the price, we will continue to have dealings with you because you are a good collaborator since many years.

It is difficult to increase purchase amount more than before, but we want to continue to sell these products.

This is another subject.

We confirmed the invoice.
The address that inform you of it is correct.

元の翻訳
I'm looking forward to seeing for the first time in a long time this time.
I attach a summary of the meeting of the 3rd.
Start time of the meeting has not been determined, it is that (from 1 o'clock pm maybe) to start as soon as the members gathered.
I would like a brief meeting with you before, if possible, of the meeting.what the circumstances you?
I will arrive at 10:30 in NY airport, and arrive at 12 o'clock in NY.

As Mr. Tanaka had said, this meeting is an important meeting to discuss the issue various occurs with that company A is to the shareholders of Company C, and we need your help.

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I'm looking forward to seeing for the first time in a long time this time.
I attach a summary of the meeting of the 3rd.
Start time of the meeting has not been determined, it is said that it will be starting as soon as the members gathered (probably around 1:30pm.)
I would like a brief meeting with you before, if possible, of the meeting. what is your availability?
I will arrive at 10:30 in NY airport, and arrive at after 12 o'clock in NY.

As Mr. Tanaka had said, this meeting is an important meeting to discuss the issue various occurs with that company A is to the shareholders of Company C, and we need your help.

元の翻訳
I received products I ordered before,but I am having some problem.
I ordered 5 of R1 shallow head,but I received only 4 of it.
I bought them all on ebay.Please refund $291 as the average amout of 5 pieces.
And I ordered 3 of R11s V2 9°、but All I received was V3.
I ask $90 discount as $30 per 1 piece.
The second,I have a question about R11s 4W I ordered before.
This item is a little lighter than spec of goods on the market.
Is it right that this item was made lighter for players needs?

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I received the products that I ordered before,but I am having some problem.
I ordered 5 of R1 shallow head,but I received only 4 of them.
I bought them all on ebay.Please refund $291 as the average amout of 5 units.
And I ordered 3 of R11s V2 9°、but All I received was V3.
I ask $90 discount as $30 per a unit.
The second,I have a question about R11s 4W that I ordered before.
This item is a little lighter than spec of goods on the market.
Is it right that this item was made lighter for players needs?

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I see.. then please put the item back to your account.
Also, i attached the invoices and pictures of the parcel number 475-6589 & 475-5974,
so please check them out.
Sorry for bothering you and thanks in advance.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I see.. then please put the item back to your account.
Also, i attached the invoices and pictures of the parcel number 475-6589 & 475-5974,
so please check them out.
Sorry for bothering you and thanks in advance.　→ Thank you for your time and attention.

元の翻訳
Good job Baja1000 race!! I suppose the race venue was really excited!
Watching it through Live Tracking, I was worried about the accident because you stopped on the middle of race.
Please relieve yourself from rough days.
May ask you something?
Can you sell Team T shirts, hoodie, or hat to me?
Of course I do pay full value for it.
It will be great for me if you sell any goods related with your team!

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Good job on Baja1000 race!! I suppose the race venue was really excited!
Watching it through Live Tracking, I was worried about the accident because you stopped on the middle of race.
Please relieve yourself from rough days.
May I ask you something?
Can you sell Team T shirts, hoodie, or hat to me?
Of course I do pay full value for it.
It will be great for me if you sell any goods related with your team!

元の翻訳
It is not to hiring people only, but it is to create the most advantage business,and our company receives it , than give it to the young who really want to work by heart.

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It is not to hiring people only, but it is to create the most advantage business,and our company receives it　→　takes it , than give it to the young who really want to work by heart. → young people who are motivated.

元の翻訳
貴族が裏切り、誰によって彼の方法を作った若い冒険家に関連付ける軽蔑たであろう、シーザーの名前のおかげで、ローマの平民の支持とイタリアの武装プロレタリアートを獲得し、独裁政治と表さ最も残忍と醜悪だったすべての革命。彼らの推論嫌悪は中産階級とイタリア全体財産の人によって共有された。同情や提携で双方の最善の人を持って、アントニウスは手ごわい優位で始まった。それは、より多くをリード上院議員の、帝王切開共和党か中立に勝つことができた東オクタビアヌスで年不在で衰退。プレゼントには、しかし、そのような変化の兆候。

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貴族が裏切り、誰によって彼の方法を作った若い冒険家に関連付ける軽蔑たであろう、シーザーの名前のおかげで、ローマの平民の支持とイタリアの武装プロレタリアートを獲得し、独裁政治と表さ最も残忍と醜悪だったすべての革命。彼らの推論嫌悪は中産階級とイタリア全体財産の人によって共有された。同情や提携で双方の最善の人を持って、アントニウスは手ごわい優位で始まった。それは、より多くをリード上院議員の、帝王切開共和党か中立に勝つことができた東オクタビアヌスで年不在で衰退。プレゼントには、しかし、そのような変化の兆候。　しかしながら、現在ではそのような変化の兆しは見られない。

元の翻訳
Kirari Moroboshi is a lovely princess.
Her proportion is B92/W65/H87 and height is 186.2cm, she is an idol with a model wise body.
She is a hilarious and active girl because she is still 17 years old and has a passionate character.
But she is too pretty.
She likes "kawaii" items.
So she coddles and has a excessive skinship with peer idols with low stature.
She is often depicted along especially with Futaba Anzu and the duo has a lot of fans.

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Kirari Moroboshi is a lovely princess.
Her proportion is B92/W65/H87 and height is 186.2cm, she is an idol with a model wise body.
She is a hilarious and active girl because she is still 17 years old and has a passionate character.
But she is too energetic!
She likes "kawaii" items.
So she coddles and has an excessive skinship with peer idols with short stature.
She is often depicted along especially with Futaba Anzu and the duo has a lot of fans.