Glen Wirawan Podiono (glenwp) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Upon delivery, please ensure that the recipient signs it with their signature.

修正後
In order to complete the delivery, please make sure that the receiver signs.

元の翻訳
It was said this year around August, there was a transaction with E-bay.
Is it possible to purchase "A" again? If the stock is available, I would very much like to purchase it.
In future, if there is a possibility to have priority it will be good.
Thank you very much, I look forward to your reply.

修正後
I am ○○, who made a purchase from you through Ebay in August this year.
Is it possible to purchase "A" again? If the stock is available, I would very much like to purchase it.
I will like to have priority to the goods if it is possible.
Thank you very much and I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your constant patronage.

I am deeply grateful for your this time round.
When you purchase 2 items, I will bundle both items together and send them. Also, for bulk purchases, I will send the invoice for free shipping.

Thank you very much.

修正後
Thank you very much for your constant patronage.

Thank you for your purchase of the two items this time.
I will pack the two items together and ship them out. Due to your high volume of purchases from us, please let us extend an invoice for the free shipping of one item to you.

Thank you very much.