直実 新原 (codenao0) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Dear Ryan

hi. okay, then I will switch my membership.
Thank you.

修正後
Dear Mr. Ryan,

Hi. ↵
↵
Okay then, I would like to switch my membership to the standard.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I purchased Yugioh Japanese CPL1-JA023, in August 16th.
I received the item, check it up at shop, apparently this item seems fake.
I do not want this, and I'd like to return this item, then get my shipping fee and price I paid.
If you not agree with this, I am going to use Paypal buyer protection.
Contact me as soon as possible, please.

修正後
I purchased Yugioh Japanese CPL1-JA023 on August 16th.
I received the item but I was told that it seems to be a fake when I had it checked at a shop.
I do not want this; I'd like to return it and get a refund for the price of the item and the shipping fees.
If you do not agree with this, I am going to use Paypal buyer protection.
Contact me as soon as possible, please.

元の翻訳
2点分の入金がまだ確認されておりませんので、次の商品を代理購入することはできません。
we can't confirm payment for 2 items yet, we can't purchace next items below for you.
今回もご入金が失敗した場合はお取り引きを中止させていただきます。
If you don't complete payment at this time, we will cancel this deal.
私もかなり長い期間ご入金をお待ちしておりました。
we have been waiting for your payment for a while.
オークションに出品しますのでそちらで購入をご検討下さい。
we are going to put those items on auction, we recommend you purchace through our auction.

私は支払いを待つことができます。あなたの都合がいい時にご購入下さい。ご入金をお待ちしております。
we can wait for your payment. please make the payment whenever you can. we are looking forward to doing business with you.

ラインストーンが付いたシールです。
It is sticker attached rhindstones.
ふっくらとした厚みのあるシールです。
It is thick plumpy sticker.
いろんなスイーツがデザインされたシールが入っています。
there are variety of sweets design sticker enclosed.

修正後
2点分の入金がまだ確認されておりませんので、次の商品を代理購入することはできません。
We can't confirm payment for 2 items yet, we can't purchace next items below for you.
今回もご入金が失敗した場合はお取り引きを中止させていただきます。
If you don't complete payment at this time, we will cancel this deal.
私もかなり長い期間ご入金をお待ちしておりました。
We have been waiting for your payment for a while.
オークションに出品しますのでそちらで購入をご検討下さい。
We are going to put those items on auction, we recommend you purchace through our auction.

私は支払いを待つことができます。あなたの都合がいい時にご購入下さい。ご入金をお待ちしております。
We can wait for your payment. please make the payment whenever you can. we are looking forward to doing business with you.

ラインストーンが付いたシールです。
It is sticker attached rhindstones.
ふっくらとした厚みのあるシールです。
It is thick plumpy sticker.
いろんなスイーツがデザインされたシールが入っています。
There are variety of sweets design sticker enclosed.