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この翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2014/02/10 13:32:37
コメント日本語原文からすると、最初のパラグラフの主語にweを使うのは不自然。固有名詞のスペル: Tokyo Big Sight、「イベントJAPAN2014」 Event JAPAN2014 その他単語や表現が直訳的で英語として不自然。persons->people; aud...

この翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語

2014/02/09 07:37:44

元の翻訳
I'm very grateful to you. I want to ask you about "RBZ Tour 14.5 Head" I ordered.
I recognize it as normal 14.5 Head but in fact I think it is may Proto Head because it is smaller,which one is correct?
If it is Proto Head,is it ok that it is the same goods I ordered on February 6th the other days.
I will wait for your reply.
Thank you always.

修正後
I'm very grateful to you for putting in your best into our business as usual.↵
I would like to ask (you) about "RBZ Tour 14.5 Head" I ordered on Jan. 28.
I understand it as standard 14.5 Head, but in fact, I think it may be Proto Head because its head is smaller than standard. What is your comment on this?
I don’t think it may interfere with my business, but I would like to inquire you to confirm what I think might be correct.↵
If it is prototype head, may I consider it similar to the one I have ordered on Feb. 6?
I will wait for your reply.
Thank you for your support as always.↵

この翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました英語 → 日本語 2014/02/08 00:30:45
元の翻訳 Nice to meet you. I'm xxx and engineering in Tokyo. I think I can expect xxx is good in the future. I will try to start it from today. Can you help me someone validate the account If you are inclined about it? Thank you in advance.	修正後 Nice to meet you. I'm xxx and an engineer in Tokyo. I think xxx has a promising future, so I think I want to get started today. Can you help me to have someone activate the account whenever it's convenient for you? Thank you in advance.