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The new E Commerce web site of BreadBoardMania will be ready soon in June.
Once open, we will inform you through Twitter, Facebook and our web pate. Thank you.

Twitter : https://twitter.com/breadbrdmaniac
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/breadboardmaniac
WEB : http://breadboardmaniac.com

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The new E Commerce web site of BreadBoardMania will be ready soon in June.
Once open, we will inform you through Twitter, Facebook and our web page. Thank you.

Twitter : https://twitter.com/breadbrdmaniac
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/breadboardmaniac
WEB : http://breadboardmaniac.com

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I explain about products.
The explain is below.

And I enclose about photos.

Thank you for your message.
I coped with your cancel and payback.

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Thank you for your message.
I would like to explain about products.
The explaination is below.

I also enclose photos.

Thank you for your message.
I have dealed with your cancelations and payback.

元の翻訳
◼︎Fuji TV "SMAP×SMAP"
- Date: May 26, 2014 Mon.
- Time: 22:001-22:54
- Website:
http://www.fujitv.co.jp/smapsmap/index.html
* Will be a guest for S-Live!

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◼︎Fuji TV "SMAP×SMAP"
- Date: May 26, 2014 Mon.
- Time: 22:00-22:54
- Website:
http://www.fujitv.co.jp/smapsmap/index.html
* Will be a guest for S-Live!

元の翻訳
[Ticket price]
S seat specified generally ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Stage side seat ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Stage side seat sharing unity ¥ 8,500 (tax included)
Restricted View ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Restricted View sharing unity ¥ 8,500 (tax included)
※ 3 years old children or older are charged. For only S seat, admission for kids under 3 years is possible. However, they will be charged if the seat is required.
※ up to two per person in only one performance.


※ a-ticket membership registration (free) is required.
Pre-registration is recommended if you have not registered yet.

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[Ticket price]
S seat specified generally ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Stage side seat ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Stage side seat sharing unity ¥ 8,500 (tax included)
Restricted View ¥ 9,000 (tax included)
Restricted View sharing unity ¥ 8,500 (tax included)
※ 3 years old children or older are charged. For only S seat, admission for kids under 3 years is possible. However, they will be charged if the seat is required.
※ up to two tickets per person in only one performance.


※ a-ticket membership registration (free) is required.
Pre-registration is recommended if you have not registered yet.

元の翻訳
Thank you for worrying me.
Now I and 6PM are furthering forward composition.

To decrease a debt in some small way, I asked to continuously work to adjust a program for produce with your campany to 6PM.

About a payment, our campany will do directly to your campany.
And about arrange for forwarder, our campany directly arrange.
From now on, your campany will be contacted by 6PM again, please good care for it.

From now on, on exchange with 6PM, you feel uneasiness even little, please consult to this mail address(English only).

Thank you.

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Thank you caring about us.
Now We and 6PM are furthering forward composition.

To decrease a debt, We asked 6PM to continuously work to adjust a program for producing with your campany.

About a payment, our campany will do directly pay your campany.
And about arrange for forwarder, our campany directly arrange them for you.
From now on, your campany will be contacted by 6PM again, please be reminded.

From now on, on exchange with 6PM, if you feel uneasiness even a little, please consult us to this mail address(English only).

Thank you.

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I have two proposals create a label design of the product. Product package and attach to the front and back labels on bags of transparency. I will make sure of the image once, b or a, please tell me if there is other demand. It is a condition of the sale, but please let sales in case the unit as much as I was sold. I believe would like to ask the sales in case unit in the case of "ASAP".

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I have made two proposals for a label design of the product. Product package will be attach to the front and back labels on bags with transparent package. Please confirm the image once and if you have preferences a or b let us know.I will make sure of the image once, The condition of the sale will be by the cases which are In the case of "ASAP", we would also like to buy in cases.