翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

2015年1/22、1/26～1/29まで、ハネムーンで訪問させて頂き、素敵な時間を過ごさせてもらいました。この度ご相談があり、こちらの窓口にご連絡させていただきました。滞在中にショップにて、２個の電気スタンドを購入しましたが、そのうちの１個の電気がつきませんでした。購入情報は下記の通りですが、新しい商品と交換してもらえますでしょうか。商品にタグなどはついたままです。結婚式で使用する予定の大事な物なので、どうしても交換して欲しいです。ご検討ください。お返事お待ちしております。

英語

Jan 22 and Jan 26-29 in 2015, we visited you for our honeymoon and had a great time. We are writing to you since there is something that we need to tell you. During our stay, we bought two sets of lighting stands, however, one of them does not work. purchase information is as follow and we are wondering if you could replace it to a new one for us. That would be really appreciate it! Thank you for your consideration.
We look forward to hearing from you.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/10 07:00:34

元の翻訳
Jan 22 and Jan 26-29 in 2015, we visited you for our honeymoon and had a great time. We are writing to you since there is something that we need to tell you. During our stay, we bought two sets of lighting stands, however, one of them does not work. purchase information is as follow and we are wondering if you could replace it to a new one for us. That would be really appreciate it! Thank you for your consideration.
We look forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Jan 22 and Jan 26-29 in 2015, we visited you for our honeymoon and had a great time. We are writing to you since there is something that we need to tell you. During our stay, we bought two sets of desk lamps. However, one of them does not work. The purchase information is as follow and we are wondering if you could replace it with a new one. That would be really appreciated! Thank you for your consideration.
We look forward to hearing from you.

[mame6]

レビューありがとうございました。自分では気づかないところを指摘していただいているので、勉強になります。参考にして、次に活かします。