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評価: 36 / ネイティブ 中国語(簡体字) / 1 Review / 2014/09/16 15:41:52

raidou
raidou 36 中国語ネイティヴ、 日本に数年間在住 英語ビジネスレベル エンタメ、...
日本語

こんな仕打ちがあるのか。仲間も家族も、みんな敵に思えた。

やさぐれた感情はなくなっていた。さらに、妻がホームレスの間に仕送りしたお金をすべて兼元氏のために貯めてくれていたと知った。そのお金を元手にオーケイウェブを立ち上げた。

その後は幸運の連続だ。試験的に立ち上げたユーザー同士が意見を交わすコミュニティサイトをＮＴＴ関連会社が自社のＨＰに採用し、その開発を受注。このサイトが評判となり、瞬く間に大手100社以上が同社のナレッジソフトを導入。群雄割拠の業界で、思わぬ金鉱を掘り当てた。

英語

I can't believe such unfair treatment. He was treated as enemy by friends, family and others.

He lost the thought of leaving home. Further more, he knew that the money he received from wife who is a homeless, is all save for KANEMOTO. He used the money to fund Okay web.

Then fortune came endlessly. The community site made by the beginning members for communication was adopted by NTT related company as official website, and they purchased the development.
The site gets a great praise, and over 100 major companies import the knowledge software.
In this intense field, he digged a big goldmine

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/09/17 12:59:25

元の翻訳
I can't believe such unfair treatment. He was treated as enemy by friends, family and others.

He lost the thought of leaving home. Further more, he knew that the money he received from wife who is a homeless, is all save for KANEMOTO. He used the money to fund Okay web.

Then fortune came endlessly. The community site made by the beginning members for communication was adopted by NTT related company as official website, and they purchased the development.
The site gets a great praise, and over 100 major companies import the knowledge software.
In this intense field, he digged a big goldmine

修正後
I can't believe such unfair treatment. He was treated as enemy by friends, family and others [mistranslation].

He lost the thought of leaving home [mistranslation]. Further more, he knew that the money he received from wife who is a homeless [mistranslation], is all save for KANEMOTO. He used the money to fund Okay web.

Then fortune came endlessly. The community site made by the beginning members [mistranslation] for communication was adopted by NTT related company as official website, and they purchased the development [mistranslation].
The site gets [tense confusion] a great praise, and over 100 major companies import [tense confusion] the knowledge software.
In this intense field, he dug a big goldmine.

The translator clearly doesn't understand the original.

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