翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 70 / 1 Review / 2014/06/20 09:57:48

renay
renay 70
日本語

6月16・17日、「虎ノ門ヒルズフォーラム」の内覧会が開催され、関係者ら約2000名に新橋・虎ノ門エリアに誕生した最大級のカンファレンスセンターの最新施設がお披露目された。

「虎ノ門ヒルズフォーラム」は、6月11日にオープンした虎ノ門ヒルズの4階・5階に配置。無柱・分割可能な3つのホールを中心に、ミーティングルーム4室と併せて2,180平米の規模で展開する。
内覧会では、5Fメインホールで開設準備を担当した森ビル・倉橋慶次氏による施設コンセプトや全体概要の説明が行われた。

英語

The modern facilities in the huge conference center in the Shinbashi/Toranomon region, "Toranomon Hills Forum" was revealed to 2000 related people at the private viewing.

"Toranomon Hills Forum" are placed on the fourth and fifth floors in the Toranamon Hills which was opened on June 11th. It has the 2180 square meters and consists of three halls which have no poles and therefore dividable and 4 meeting rooms.
The private viewing included the description of its whole structure and and concepts of each facility from a representative of MORI Building, Keiji Kurahashi who was responsible for the setting for the main hall on the fifth floor.

レビュー ( 1 )

ryojiyono 52 英検1級。 TOEFL623。 TOEIC 975。
ryojiyonoはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/20 14:32:52

元の翻訳
The modern facilities in the huge conference center in the Shinbashi/Toranomon region, "Toranomon Hills Forum" was revealed to 2000 related people at the private viewing.

"Toranomon Hills Forum" are placed on the fourth and fifth floors in the Toranamon Hills which was opened on June 11th. It has the 2180 square meters and consists of three halls which have no poles and therefore dividable and 4 meeting rooms.
The private viewing included the description of its whole structure and and concepts of each facility from a representative of MORI Building, Keiji Kurahashi who was responsible for the setting for the main hall on the fifth floor.

修正後
The modern facilities in the huge conference center in the Shinbashi/Toranomon region, "Toranomon Hills Forum" was revealed to 2000 related people at the private viewing on June 16 and 17.

"Toranomon Hills Forum" are placed on the fourth and fifth floors in the Toranamon Hills which was opened on June 11th. It has the 2180 square meters and consists of three halls which have no pillars and therefore dividable and 4 meeting rooms.
The private viewing included the description of its whole structure and and concepts of each facility from a representative of MORI Building, Keiji Kurahashi who was responsible for the setting for the main hall on the fifth floor.

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