翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ta43701
日本で独自に進化した手軽なパーティー食「お鍋」
日本の各地で独自の味付けと具を盛り込んだ鍋料理。家族の団欒やちょっとした集まりでもよく食べられる鍋料理を紹介。

英語

ta43701
"Onabe" (hot pot dish) is an easy party food that has evolved independently in Japan.
In many parts of Japan, There are many kinds of "Onabe" with original seasonings and ingredients. I will introduce some hot pot dishes 　which may　be　　often　 eaten 　at　small gathering or family get　together.

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元の翻訳
ta43701
"Onabe" (hot pot dish) is an easy party food that has evolved independently in Japan.
In many parts of Japan, There are many kinds of "Onabe" with original seasonings and ingredients. I will introduce some hot pot dishes 　which may　be　　often　 eaten 　at　small gathering or family get　together.

修正後
ta43701
"Onabe" (hot pot dish), an easy party food, evolved independently in Japan.
In many parts of Japan, there are many kinds of "Onabe" with original seasonings and ingredients. I will introduce some hot pot dishes which families often eat at small gathering or when they get together.

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