翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

商品を受け取りました。
有り難う御座います。

せっかく送って頂いてのですが、
ランタンの上のネジがついていませんでした。
また、
ネジを止めるボルトも折れていました。

とても悲しいです。

一部の返金をお願いします。
○○ドルの返信をして下さい。

宜しくお願い致します。
○○

英語

I have received the item.
Thank you.

However, a screw on the lantern had been removed, and a bolt that hols the screw had been broken.

It is quite a pity.

Could you give me a partial refund?
I would like to request a refund of ** dollars.

I'm waiting for your reply.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/25 09:59:58

元の翻訳
I have received the item.
Thank you.

However, a screw on the lantern had been removed, and a bolt that hols the screw had been broken.

It is quite a pity.

Could you give me a partial refund?
I would like to request a refund of ** dollars.

I'm waiting for your reply.

修正後
I have received the item.
Thank you.

However, a screw on the lantern has been removed, and a bolt that holds the screw has been broken as well.

It is quite a pity.

Could you give me a partial refund?
I would like to request a refund of ** dollars.

I'm waiting for your reply.

[tani1973]

Thank you very much for review!