富永将司 (tensei3013) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Aug 2014 at 12:08
original Please check it carefully again. The last transaction weighted 23 kg and shipping was 80.65€ by air. Even though it’s by surface mail, it’s 235 kg and shipping is 967.5€ this time. Why is it that it’s sent by the slow surface mail and the cost per 1kg is so high? At any rate, please issue me a refund as the package didn’t arrive. I also paid a high shipping fee. You have the obligation to deliver the package. That’s a business protocol. If you solve this issue, I intend to keep doing business with you. I look forward to your favorable answer.	corrected Please check it carefully again. In the last transaction, It weighted 23 kg and the shipping was 80.65€ by air. Even though it’s by surface mail, it’s 235 kg and the shipping is 967.5€ this time. Why is it that it’s sent by the slow surface mail and the cost per 1kg is so high? At any rate, please issue a refund to me as the package didn’t arrive. I also paid a high shipping fee. You have the obligation to deliver the package. That’s a business protocol. If you solve this issue, I intend to keep doing business with you. I look forward to your favorable answer.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

05 Aug 2014 at 12:08

original
Please check it carefully again.
The last transaction weighted 23 kg and shipping was 80.65€ by air.
Even though it’s by surface mail, it’s 235 kg and shipping is 967.5€ this time.
Why is it that it’s sent by the slow surface mail and the cost per 1kg is so high?

At any rate, please issue me a refund as the package didn’t arrive.
I also paid a high shipping fee.
You have the obligation to deliver the package.
That’s a business protocol.
If you solve this issue, I intend to keep doing business with you.
I look forward to your favorable answer.

corrected
Please check it carefully again.
In the last transaction, It weighted 23 kg and the shipping was 80.65€ by air.
Even though it’s by surface mail, it’s 235 kg and the shipping is 967.5€ this time.
Why is it that it’s sent by the slow surface mail and the cost per 1kg is so high?

At any rate, please issue a refund to me as the package didn’t arrive.
I also paid a high shipping fee.
You have the obligation to deliver the package.
That’s a business protocol.
If you solve this issue, I intend to keep doing business with you.
I look forward to your favorable answer.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 03 Aug 2014 at 03:29
original On July 1st which is canadian national foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office. Lead by the members of Japan panchapters, meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people rerated with MICE participated. The reason why Toronto is famous, flying to Toronto from Haneda directoly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. There are various events to celebrate for national foundation 55th on 2017.	corrected On July 1st which is Canadian National Foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office. Lead by the members of MPI Japan chapters based on special partnership , meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people related to MICE participated. As the reason why Toronto is attractive, flying to Toronto from Haneda directly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. Also there are plan to hold 150th anniversary of events to celebrate for national foundation in 2017.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

03 Aug 2014 at 03:29

original
On July 1st which is canadian national foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office.
Lead by the members of Japan panchapters, meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people rerated with MICE participated.

The reason why Toronto is famous, flying to Toronto from Haneda directoly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. There are various events to celebrate for national foundation 55th on 2017.

corrected
On July 1st which is Canadian National Foundation day, There was a reception at the academy hills in Minato Tokyo held by Toronto's tourist office.
Lead by the members of MPI Japan chapters based on special partnership , meeting planners, and travel agencies, many people related to MICE participated.

As the reason why Toronto is attractive, flying to Toronto from Haneda directly, close to prince edward island where " Anne of Green Gables" is filmed, and safe, friendly urban. Also there are plan to hold 150th anniversary of events to celebrate for national foundation in 2017.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 01 Aug 2014 at 07:09
original Thank you for having meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America. For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact with Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below. When you contact with him/her, would you inquire him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which we have not obtained yet?	corrected Thank you for having meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America. For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact with Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below. When you contact with him/her, would you inquire him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which we have not obtained yet?↵ ↵ 修正：↵ Thank you for having the meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America.↵ ↵ For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below.↵ ↵ When you contact him/her, would you inquire of him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which have not been obtained yet?↵

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

01 Aug 2014 at 07:09

original
Thank you for having meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America.

For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact with Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below.

When you contact with him/her, would you inquire him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which we have not obtained yet?

corrected
Thank you for having meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America.

For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact with Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below.

When you contact with him/her, would you inquire him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which we have not obtained yet?↵
↵
修正：↵
Thank you for having the meeting with me last week. I was very glad discussing with you prior to be assigned to America.↵
↵
For A company, as I explained to you during the meeting the other day, I am grateful if you could directly contact Mr./Ms. C from A company. The contact information of Mr./Ms. C is shown below.↵
↵
When you contact him/her, would you inquire of him/her about the point for "what is a reason(s) for our company to accept their request" while explaining our stance towards their request because there may be other documents (contract) which have not been obtained yet?↵

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 23:17
original Thank you for the message. Isn't it arrived yet since we've already shipped the merchandise out. We will check it as well. We will refund your payment if it's not arrived.	corrected Thank you for the message. Isn't it arrived yet since we've already shipped the merchandise out. We will check it as well. We will refund your payment if it's not arrived.↵ ↵ 修正（2行目, 4行目）↵ Haven't it arrived yet since we've already shipped the merchandise out.↵ We will refund your payment if it doesn't arrive.

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