Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

こんにちは
返信ありがとうございます
日本への発送の承諾ありがとうございます

下記の住所に送ってもらえますか？

ペイパルの請求書を送ってもらえますか？
よろしくお願い致します。

ありがとうございます

English

Hello
Thanks for the reply.
Thank you for accepting the shipment to Japan.

Can you send it to the following address?

Can you send me the invoice via PayPal?
Thank you for your attention.

Thank you in advance.

Reviews ( 2 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 27 Jun 2014 at 23:31

Standard procedure is you put a comma after "hello" at the beginning of an e-mail, but this is only a minor error and the rest of the translation sounds natural, and is constructed perfectly.

[jumot]

Thank you for your review and comment.

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 27 Jun 2014 at 23:31

original
Hello
Thanks for the reply.
Thank you for accepting the shipment to Japan.

Can you send it to the following address?

Can you send me the invoice via PayPal?
Thank you for your attention.

Thank you in advance.

corrected
Hello
Thanks for the reply.
Thank you for accepting the shipment to Japan.

Can you send it to the following address?

Can you send me the invoice via PayPal?
Thank you for your attention.

Best regards,

[jumot]

Thank you for your review.